Dearest Aashna,
thank You for writing this story and special thanks for the sweet treat :) I love both ice cream and brownies... :)
The Epilogue was a bit sad but showed that Ginny and Harry's love was really deep and real, not just a short affair. Ginny stood up for Harry even in troubled times and this chapter suggests that they will stay together forever. So it is a happy ending.
I enjoyed the overall story and consider You a very good writer with precious thoughts, serious emotions, rich vocabulary, perfect characterisations and descriptions and a good sense of humour.
Congrats!
Hope you'll have another story soon!
Hugs xxx

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Dearest Aashna,
yes, it turned out well :) And I'm happy about that.
The scene was really cute, I liked the way they first saw each other (e.g. as a reflection in the mirror) and how embarrassed they were. The description of the atmosphere was effective (Ginny's 'flowery scent, 'fluffy couch' and the characters' clothes). Using a muggle device, a DVD player was an interesting idea, the definition 'weird disc-like object with a hole in the centre' made me smile.
And of course the ending must have been absolutely satisfying for all the readers...
Well done.
Hugs xxx

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Dearest Aashna,
sorry for disappearing so long but this was an extremely busy period for me... I still have a lot to do but I try to save some time for hpff...
I hope You are fine and things are going well.
I was happy to read your story again :) This chapter was really interesting, making the reader's anticipation grow about the outcome... The letter from the secret admirer was quite romantic and the conversation between Hermione and Ginny well written. I wonder how much Ginny will be surprised at the end...
Looking fwd to the next chappie
Hugs xxx

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perfect epilouge, we were in this alternate universe with a lot of fluff, and then BAM! we are back in the story jk planned out. brilliant

Author's Response: Hello once again *smiles brightly*
Yippe!! I am so glad u liked d endin so much.. thnx 4 d magnificent words n yeah, i just meant 2 fill d entire story wid loads of fluff n d heavenly warm feelin which we call as 'Love'. I am so happy dat i was able 2 dat n of course d dreams of love den had 2 be connected wid d reality but am glad dat u found it so engagin. Thanx 4 d marvelous review n an incredible say :) :)

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it's sad this is the final chapter but it was enjoyable nonetheless. keep writing more great stories please!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Hi Harry and Ginny
Thanx 4 d wonderful review.. I am so glad u liked d entire story *smiles jubilantly* Well, i am soon puttin up a new story.. i hope u like dat as well. Ur precious comments r really welcomed. Thanx once again 4 d awesome words n a stupendous 10/10.. dat just so makes my day! :) :)

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Hi Aashna,
This is really sweet. Harry's nervousness was really well portrayed- much better than the nerves he got around Cho.
I just like to ask if you can look at the start of my story 'In the beginning...'. I'd like your advice on the writing.
Ravensdaughter

Author's Response: Hello Ravensdaughter
nice 2 hear frm u *smiles* Gettin comments on endins really makes feel gud n equally gud is ur heartfelt review. thank u 4 writin me one n sharin ur precious thoughts. I am gald u liked Harry's characterisation, i really had 2 work hard on dat 1, imaginin a 14 yr old guy who gets nervous around gals more dan being around a fire-breathin dragon.. I am glad u cud percieve dat n thanx 4 ur authentic comment on d said..
n sure, i'll love 2 read ur story, I am on my way :) :)

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Interesting decision to use DVDs given that the series is supposed to happen in the early and mid ninties before DVDs, it was still VHS then. But still interesting use of it and I like it even though its not set well from a time frame point of view referencing muggle technology

Author's Response: I agree with u, d back drop didn't suit such an advanced technology but as i put it, to 'break d ice' i had 2 find an easy going yet eloquent way n i thought movies will jell well with it.. d idea of VHS didn't appeal 2 me, so i straight away wrote a DVD player 'cause in my perception, it made it more classy. I am glad dat u still find d story engagin n to ur likin.. i hope u like d epilogue as well. Thanx 4 d amazin n genuine review :) :)

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Very cute and engaging. You kept it simple but you weren't trite. i liked the interaction between Hermione and Harry. look forward to the last chapter but sad it's the last. maybe you'll pick this up in another story? keep writing. you're good at it. pw

Author's Response: Hello Pacific Wizard
Wow! thanx 4 d lovely compliments, particulary d last one.. i am equally overwhelmed as was Ginny on findin out her secret admirer *smiles gleefully*
U r very kind n those r sum really awesome words.. u made my day! I hope u like d epilogue as well n thnx once again 4 writin such a sweet review which in d basic essence was really heartfelt and dats wat makes it most secial.. kudos!! :) :)

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i knida wish there was more on ginny's part, i know she was overwhelmed, but this is ginny, and harry just showed her how much he loves her, i think she could have seemed happier, either way awesome chapter

Author's Response: I partly agree wid u.. dere cud have been more reactions on Ginny's part, like u said display of more jubilant n joyful feelins. But den i imagined a 13 yr old gal goin 2 meet a complete stranger frm her point of view until she discovers it is Harry which is much later.. she was bound 2 b jittery n nervous, dat is y elements like movie n all had 2 b added 2 make d flow of openin up 2 each other on both of their part easy goin. I appreciate wat u say n thnx once again 4 an awesome n analytical say, ur reviews always make me feel gr8.. *smiles*

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i loved that last line! soo godd so true it makes me think about all the time the two of them spent together before he realized his feeelings. you just wrapped up Harry and Ginny's love story in one line!!

Author's Response: Hello wicked quill
Wow! those r some really kind words *smiles* I am so glad u liked d finish 2 d chappie.. i put special effort on endins *yipee!!*
Even i like HarryGinny pairin.. a cute teenage love which converts into life-time of a pious and loyal bond, of course with a lot of love as well.. Thanx 4 such incredible words, dey made my day :) n i hope u like future chappies as well.. :) :)

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it was cute how Ginny found out that it was Harry. by the way, her last name is Weasley and not Weasely. i hope i could help u and i can't wait to read more.^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Hello Harry and Ginny
I feel gud dat u liked d way i planned out the unravellin of Ginny's secret admirer.. thanx 4 writin a sweet review n tellin me ur sugary thoughts abt it.. :) n of course swty, ur every assistance is most welcomed n abt more well, epilogue is just on d way.. have an eye out 4 it. I hope u like it. Thanx again 4 an amazin review :) :)

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Fluffamundo! Love it completely! Nice to see a truly sweet, romantic centered story for Harry and Ginny on the site! You are doing a great job with this! Don't keep us in suspense for long!

Author's Response: Wow! Thanx 4 d incredible words.. gosh, u r too kind n am so glad u like my story so much *grins broadly* Thank u so much 4 writin such a heartfelt n genuine review on ur part.. dat seriously made my day or rather my week actually :) :) As 4 d next chappie, well, only epilogue is left and its dere now, i hope u like it.. ur thoughts on it r most welcome. Kudos 4 a stupendous review!!

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Wat d frick, wear is d rest I am so excited to read the rest and there is no more, I want more and I want it now, ur writing is exqusite I love it plse, plse , plse plse write more

Author's Response: Hello Whitney26
Thanx 4 ur incredible comments.. dey r really very appreciated :) :) I am so glad dat u r really intrigued abt d forthcomin chappies.. n a million thanx 4 ur kind comment on my writin flare.. i really like 2 hear abt it *Although, nice ones* Anyways, as 4 d next chappie, well, am sorry 2 say dat dere has 2 b a lill more wait regardin dat umm am currently workin on my other 2 fics along wid dis.. hence, a prolonged wait. But, i hope u like wat i've planned in d forthcomin chappies *hopefully* Till then, Stay tuned please!!

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oohh Ginny is going to meet Harry even though she doesn't know it yet. will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Hello Harry and Ginny
I hope d chappie made it up 4 d long wait.. *hopefully* Anyways, thanx 4 writin me a fantastic review of urs wid d ever-awaited splendid 10/10.. n abt update, well, umm here.. *offers u an immense choco-chip cookie* Well, friend, it'll b a long time since i'll update dis fic 'cause am workin on my other 2 as well. Nonetheless, thanx 4 ur kind words n stay tuned please!!
PS: I hope enjoy ur cookie :) :)

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Awsome. I always wanted to see harry go to the ball with Ginny, and now thanks to you I can 10/10 keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanx for readin thru my story n leavin such an amazin review :) :) I am so glad u like it so much.. n as for Harry/Ginny couple 2 d ball, even i wanted it dat way, Harry leadin his magnificent lady Ginny 2 d stage rather than Parvati, so in developed dis idea in my mind.. Anyways, thanx 4 ur stupendous ratin.. a 10/10 always makes my day!! n one more thing i want 2 say n dat is.. Stay tuned please!!

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hey aashana!
i'm actually meant to be doing an assignment now, but i like procrastinating :)
the characterisation was great, and the story is overall excellent.
i really like the idea of a shy harry, i dont know why, but shy boys make me swoon. *swoon*
hahahaha
so yeah, back to my assignment;
but before i leave you, i will say that i am impatiently waiting for the next chapter.
x

p.s. could you please do me a huge favour and review my story 'mounting tension' ?
you're an absolutely fantastic writer, and i greatly value your opinion on where i can improve etc.
:)

Author's Response: Hello Eliseelove
Well, u r kinda like me.. i guess its same wid all of us.. d 'dilly-dally' people.. Nontheless, a short blithe attitude once in a while does help us although, not a persistent one. I am glad u reviewed dis story of mine n u liked my portrayal n d plot-line.. :) I am happy dat u like d shy harry, i intend to make him a pretty amateur in lovey-dovey matters as it is traditionally in buks *smiles* n i agree wid u on d fact dat shy guys to an extent, although not overly, cud b really charmin *grins*
Nontheless, thanx 4 ur cute n sugary review.. abt d next chappie, well, 2 b candid, it'll take sum-time 'cause am workin on my other story 'A Tryst With Destiny' for now n once it is done, i'll surely come back 2 dis one.. n thanx 4 ur lovely comment abt my writin skills *smiles gleefully*
n sure, I wud definitely read ur story n leave my comments abt it in d form of a review of courese. I am on my way!
PS: All the best for your assignment :)

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when are u going to updated this one

Author's Response: Well, i guess it'll b a long time till i update dis story 2 b frank.. 'cause once d que opens, i'll b workin on my other story 'A Tryst With Destiny' but wen am done wid it, i'll surely come back to dis one. Nonetheless, thanku 4 readin thru my story n leavin a comment.. however umm surreal yet inquirin it mite b :)

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Great!!! I love it so much! It's so cute!

I also noticed a few spelling mistakes. A few times, you put an extra 'F' in 'Professor' and you miss a couple of "I" when Harry is talking to himself.

Anyways, great story and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Love,
quickquackduck4

Author's Response: Hi quickquackduck4
Thanx 4 ur compliments.. as 4 certain spellin mistakes, well, 2 b frank i did read it again wen it was posted here but pretty hastily, so mite've skipped certain mis-spelled words.. No worries, i'll surely check it once again n correct it through editing of course. Anyways, thanx 4 ur amazin words n compliments n i particulary liked d 'cute' comment.. it was so nice of u :) I guess one more thing which i wanna say is dat Stay tuned please..

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Awww, I love the poem and rose. It's so cute! Harry had better get a move on! The ball's coming up soon!

I like the fact that Ron is still asking Hermione who her date is!

Love it
quickquackduck4

Author's Response: Hello quickquackduck4
Thanx 4 another of ur kind and wondeful review.. I am glad dat u liked d various ideas compiled by me in dis chappie.. :) n abt Ron askin Hermione.. well, plausibly dey wanna b wid each other however subtle d expression mite be. Nonetheless, i am so happy dat u like it so much.. thanx 4 tellin me dat thru ur kind compliments :)

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Very cute! I love the fact that Harry is trying to get Ginny rather than Cho. I never liked her. . . such a weirdo.
Also, I love the fact that Harry is asking Hermione for help, just like in the books!

Love it so far,
quickquackduck4

Author's Response: Hi quickquackduck4
Well, its gr8 2 c ur review here :) I am so happy dat u really like d story so far n thanx 4 d 'cute' comment *smiles* Even i prefer Harry with Ginny only, so i removed Cho frm d picture n frm dere started dis lill shy but love-tale abt d duo. I am glad dat u find d Harry-Hermione team workin together 2 help Harry get Ginny good.. i think she is d only one Harry can ever ask help from for such thins.. Anyways, Thanx a lot 4 ur review n kind comments :)

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Dearest Aashna,
great chapter as always!:)
The idea of the rose petals and the writing on the mirror was really romantic :) Just like getting a bunch of roses and the ball dress... I loved the way you described it (I wish I had a dress like that...)
The portrayal of the characters was awesome again, especially the cruel Snape and Ron with his bon appetite :) Entertaining summer reading!:)
Go on with the good job!:)
10/10
Hugs xxx
silvergreen

Author's Response: Hi Silvergreen
Thanx 4 ur bunch of compliments.. wow! I am so glad dat u like d chappie so much. :)
Yeah, it was more on the romantic side, so had 2 use the special effects.. glad dat u like dem. Abt d dress, well i saw a picture of it some-where to b honest and it was definitely an eye-catcher and fitted d ambience well so i wrote abt it.. well, its summer time, u can go buy urself a whole new sunny wardrobe n perhaps can squeeze in a cocktail dress like dat.. sounds good? *winks* Anyways, U really make me very happy wen u say dat characters were portrayed in the rite way \'cause u being a writer urself definitely must be knowin dat its quite a task and complimets on dat really makes feel good!! Snape had to be cruel to Harry as always, nothing new and abt Ron well, wat can i say except dat he can eat anything dat moves*winks* Thanx once again 4 ur numerous compliments and a 10/10 coming from such a good writer like urself is very brilliant and u really make me smile jubilantly wen u say its entertaining \'cause dat is quite a feat.. Thank u 4 letting me know ur thoughts by such a wonderful review :)

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finally an update!!! Aasnha i'm loving this fic and i can't wait to see when Ginny finds out her potential lover is Harry. will u update soon pleeease?^_^

1000/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Hello Harry and Ginny
I am happy dat u really like d next chappie in my this short tale.. I know it was a long wait but i hope it flared out well. I am glad dat u like d fic so much and all i want to say is Stay tuned please.. thanx 4 ur wondeful compliments and a 1000/10 is omg! amazin.. thanx 4 makin my day, u r awesome!

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This was short- but really good! This chapter was much better then the first, and, gr, you left me on a clifffie!!! Can't wait for the next chappie, and am excited about the idea for Ginny's admirer. ~writergirl8

Author's Response: Thanx 4 d kind words dere.. i am glad dat u liked d lill ideas compiled by me :) :)
Oh well, d cliffe is must and am delighted dat u look fwd 2 d next chappie.. wud b dere soon after d que is opened of course. Thanx once again 4 ur review and praisin my story.

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Okay. you defiantly have good potential. I think that over time your writing can defiantly improve. I always find this as my chapters go on. On the beta reader front... one part of the story was a bit rough, but you're actually pretty good so I wouldn't really worry. Your writing is going to get there, but right now it doesn't flow and your characters don't seem like characters, really. They seem like words. You are adding in the right adjectives, though, and I have noticed that few authors on HPFF can make their characters be people. You can get the character thing down if you keep on writing though. From what I see here, I know you can. Some parts with the characters were very good, and some were not as good. The character thing and the thing about your writing flowing are related, though. If your writing flows your characters seem better and vise versa. However, this is simply constructive because frankly, I'm already rather addicted to this story. Just write, write write if it brings you pleasure and you will get better. I submitted a whole story with 21 chapters and it absolutely stunk- but it got better as it went on. The next story I went to write was better, the next better. I will not say that I'm a good author (actually, I was just told by a reviewer I wasn't amazing, but I wasn't horrible) but I am a very avid reader and you asked for construcitive critcism. I sincerely hope that I didn't hurt your feelings! Please don't be mad! ~writergirl8

Author's Response: Hi there.. thanx 4 ur such a detailed review and i wud say an in-depth umm analysis of my writing nuances. I am glad dat u think i can improve on even more if i keep on writing.. thank u for dat. I myself absolutely agree with u abt d hierarchy of writing, yes it definitely is true that the skills develop and notations are learnt with time and progressive writing. I see ur point, this is my second story and definitely better than the first and now am writing a third ( which would soon be here) but i myself feel that its the bestest of all i've written till now. This writing arena is a bit new for me, since a few months back i was just happy being a very enthusiastic reader but then decided to explore the realms and joy of moving a pen around the paper and giving words to my thoughts.. i think i've come a long way since then and am happy dat u think in future i'll get to the height of the cliff, well i've just started climbing. Anyways, am delighted that u r hooked on to the story and think its good. I certainly am not mad, rather pleased 'cause as a reviewer, ur opinion matters a lot so that i could work on it and make it blossom. Thanx once again 4 ur descriptive say, it really was well, a pleasure to read it!

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Hey! Me again!

Another good chapter!

Some of it reads a bit awkwardly and a quick read-over will probably fix the grammar errors, but other than that, it's great!

I'm really interested to see what happens next! :]

Harry's "phase one" was really cute.

Great job!

--DracoFerret11

Author's Response: Hi again DracoFerret11
Thanx 4 ur review and ur compliments. I am delighted dat d chapter made a good enough read 4 u. Of course, about the teeny-meeny errors, while i'll just sweep over them thru d editing of course. I am happy dat i have ur interest 'cause that is wat i seek and am glad dat u thought it was cute. Thanx 4 prasing it thru another of ur fantastic review :)

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