Reading Reviews for Without You
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Review #1, by kjp without you

4th February 2012:
I love it, its so cute. Its a inspiring story. I love ginny and harry they are perfect. thanks 4 writing this.

Author's Response: ur welcome. thanks for the positive review! :)

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Review #2, by Manwe Valarian without you

12th April 2009:
I liked it.

The fic had a feeling of poetry, the pacing and wording. It was in a prose format. Maybe that was the actual intention, I am not a great reader of poetry. maybe if the formatting was slightly different, it would flow and appear better.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I did intentionally write it in a prose type format, so if you're not a great lover of poetic writing--as I am--it might've been hardish to read. I appreciate your candor.

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Review #3, by harrylilyjames without you

11th April 2009:
this was a cute story.In the summary why does it say 'a missing conversation' when they actually dont talk to one another in it?
It was sweet. If you put in a bit more detail and instead of putting (Harry)( Ginny) whenever the pov changed, kind of described it to the reader so that they get who is talking without being told directly
Other than that,it was a nice read, 7/10

Author's Response: I guess I put "missing conversation" because in the book they didn't talk like this. And the talking is half narrative; I guess it was too subtle. I'll improve the pov detail as well. Thank you for your review.

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Review #4, by FriendofMolly without you

11th April 2009:
First, this was really good. Second, one little bitty mistake, Harry's eyes are Green, not hazel. Third, do you really have more? To quote Hermione, "Let's see it then"

Author's Response: Yes, I actually do have more. I wanted to see if there was a good response to the first piece before I put any of the rest of it in there. I guess I will now... :) And oops on Harry's eyes. I'll fix that. Thanks for the review.

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