Such a cute and fluffy plot bunny it was too, I might add.
I am a tad concerned that Harry and Ron did not seem to be speaking like the normal 14 year old(~ish) ages they were in the book.
I do look forward to any extension you may add to this---Winky will much more of a challenge and that will surely be an emotional sight to read.
~~Lauraf68Author's Response: Sorry, that is one of my weaknesses that I am working on. The "voice" my characters use always seems to come out as mature 57 year old me. I have to develop this skill. Thanks for the review. I may take this as a series of one shots relating the courtship, marriage and life of Dobby and Winky. I'll see if any more plot bunnies gather. Report Review
Great chapter. By the way i changed my e-mail so if u could send an e-mail with something, i would be appreciated.^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thank you. I have been unable to write as much as I would like. Real life intrudes, and I am taking turns in updating with both my stories. Report Review
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