A very good one. I will love it if you include another chapter.Author's Response: I hadn't really thought about that, to be honest it was just a thought I had and got it on paper quite quickly. But if you have any ideas on how this story could progress I would love to hear from you. Maybe a follow up story explaining how it led to this moment or what happens after. Would love to hear from you. Thanks x x shannona x Report Review
Oooh saucy. Hehe. That was really good. So intense, go Harry and Hermione!
10/10Author's Response: Thanks I do love a good Harry and Hermione story and this was something fun that I really wanted to do. Report Review
lol...the ending was sweet.
I am starting to like Harry/Hermione all of a sudden, and this was cute.
Really nice job.Author's Response: Thanks...same here I never really liked them at first, but now I think I like them more than Ron/Hermione lol. xx Report Review
a very cute and to the point one-shot. nice job, hun! Report Review
Cute. I kind of liked it.Author's Response: Thanks x x Report Review
Cute story. I remember the song from the movie "Practical Magic". It is a nicely written piece. You have some good emotions with Hermione. Her thoughts are correctly scattered about and in a state of panic.
Keep up the good workAuthor's Response: Thanks. I like to think that my thoughts are a lot like Hermione's so I find it easy to write as her. Please read Pandora's Books if you like this one. Thanks x x Report Review
Who is the song by?
btw very good emotional storyAuthor's Response: it's by Faith Hll and thanks Report Review
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