I loved it! I want another story about a few years later! :) I think it'd be great!
Good job!

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I really liked this one shot! Haha, but I do wonder what's gonna happen when she ís older! Maybe you could write like a... sequel? one shot? sequel. Thingy. God, my english sucks! Whatever, I simply loved it. I love the way you write, it's really relaxed. Enough details and it was just.. very sweet!

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Amazing one-shot; I loved the detail and writing style. These are the kinds of stories that make me fall for Oliver even more. :]
10/10

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Lately I've been getting into the Oliver/Katie scene, and this one-shot is another reason why to love it. Excellent! ;D
-anonie

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oh my god!! that was such a nice one-shot! one of, if not the best i've ever read!!!

so sweet!! please do a sequal!!

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I absolutely loved it! This was a truly fabulous one-shot and a great take on Katie Bell/Oliver Wood, I love the pairing and when I saw this fic on the recently added list, well, I couldn't resist. You also satisfied the side of me that longs for endings that aren't happy, what a sadist, Lol. I mean, there was nothing in canon to really suggest the ship, but in fanon it works. I think you did a wonderful job with your characterisation of Katie, she wasn't vapid and didn't spend the whole time thinking 'OMG, he is like so fit', she was entirely believable. You are a great writer and you managed to set the scene very well, it flowed, you projected the emotions perfectly and it seemed the very definition of effortless.

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Sorry I'm not logged in, but I just had to review immediately! I simply adored this. It wasn't too long, or too short, or too detailed, just...perfection. Definitely the best one shot I've ever read! Well done!

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