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Review #1, by xLauriePotter 1 of 1

9th June 2010:
I liked it. But, Not one of my favourites. I suppose its just 'cos I love harry/ginny. :)) Beautiful writing though. x

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked my writing!

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Review #2, by Daphne 13 1 of 1

31st May 2009:
Loved it. Interesting alternate pair. Adoring. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! :D A lot of people think Ginny and Neville are too odd of a pairing, and therefore don't appreciate this story. I'm glad that you recognized how interesting they would be together. Thanks for the review!

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Review #3, by DracoFerret11 1 of 1

31st May 2009:
Hey there, me again!

So here's an interesting couple indeed! :]

I loved how you portrayed it. Without the epilouge to DH, this could be canon. :D

You write extremely well, as I'm sure I've said several times.

Great story! I'm off to read more of you stuff. :]

--DracoFerret11/DarkRose

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Review #4, by Prongs_Foot 1 of 1

16th May 2009:
dang, i thought it was gonna be harry! seriously tho i CANNOT picture a g/n relationship! WAY WAY WAY TOO WEIRD!!!

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Review #5, by Aashna 1 of 1

25th April 2009:
Hi Subrosa
Well, dat was nicely written. Its really good to read a new and an unexpected couple rather than the 'meant to be ones'.
U really did a nice job with words, language was lucid, voabulary precise and ofcourse in a flow dat is. So, overall i liked reading it and it turned out real good!
-Aashna

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Review #6, by Animic 1 of 1

18th April 2009:
Hey! It's Animic from the forums.

Personally, I've never been a big Ginny/Anyone else besides Harry shipper. Haha. That's just me, though. :P

Other than that, I thought it was pretty good. It seemed like a lot of small talk, though. That's my only thing. Many times I read about the characters talking about nothing. I thought it was cute but you could limit the useless conversations.

As unbelieveable Ginny and Neville are as a couple I thought you did a nice job. I thought they were cute. However, I don't think it was believable that the entire Weasley family would be angry with her for not marrying Harry. That didn't seem right. They all really like Harry but they don't seem like the kind of parents that would dissaprove.

Also, I would have added Ron in with it. I'm sure Ron could have played a larger part. He's always been super protective of the people that Ginny dates (6th book. haha.) Ron could have given Neville a hard time and that could add some humor and conflict. I love Ron when he's angry. lol

But, I thought it was alright. 8/10
~Animic

Author's Response: I've never been a big Ginny shipper either. I, however, have a tendency to draw a pairing with her in it when I decide to join a challenge in the forums :) And I end up needing to work with what I get. I've actually wound up enjoying her as a character, but it's usually hard for me to see other guys with her. So, I just do my best.

Thank you so much for all of your feedback. I didn't want to add Ron into the story because I didn't want to really get into anyone's distinct reaction to them as a couple since the focus was more on them and how willing they were to do anything to be together. I know what you mean about him adding some spice into it. I do love me some angry Ron-ness! Thanks again!


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Review #7, by IluvCaptainJack 1 of 1

14th April 2009:
Very sweet. I loved it! Was Ginny Pregnant??? :D:D:D

Author's Response: Yes, she was! :) Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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