I kind of love this. I realize that it's pretty old, but still. It original and fresh an different from a lot of the other prices on here. You are so talented, hon. Report Review
LOVE IT! this is how I like to imagine Sirius, back when the Marauders are still young and carefree (almost)! great job!
10/10!! Report Review
I totally totally knew that they were in a cinema. It's brilliant, and I absolutely love it. Sirius is my favorite, by far. Report Review
I love the ending - it cracks me up. Report Review
Heh heh heh. Not what I was expecting, I must admit, but I'm not surprised. Sounds like something Sirius would do.
Brilliant story!Author's Response: It does, doesn't it? Maybe I'll write something else about him 'doing it' in public, like a girls toilet or a changing room even! Nah, I don't think so. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it (: Report Review
I burst into laughter when Sirius told Prongs & Moony about the cinema thing, just when my mum walked in on me. Huh. I must of looked funny, sitting on my bed laughing at a laptop screen.
10/10 xx Report Review
oh my god thats sooo funny =DAuthor's Response: Glad you think so :D Thanks for the review! (: Report Review
I liked it.
I love Sirius Black, I have to say. I would marry him if I could!
And I like how you portrayed him here =)
I'm now going to read all your other stories =)Author's Response: Thank you! :D Yes, I'd marry him too. You'd have to beat me to get him ;P No wait .. that's Remus. Never mind! Aww you .. don't have to but OKAY ^.^ Thanks again Report Review
Marc is awesome (: xoxoAuthor's Response: And so is Ash, the awesome rainbow ;D aka, my birthday buddy ^.^ MAN you have a long nickname! Report Review
Oh my god, I can't stop laughing... that was great. It was really fun. It was good. You're such a great writer I can't wait believe it. I love it darling, it was super. I loved it... You should do more one shots like this.
Natalie.Author's Response: Yay, another satisfied reader ;D Thank you! This means a lot since it took me forever to think of a place where they could 'do it,' :L Ah, I'm not too good at the twists and turns end of one-shots but I'll consider it ;D Thank you so much! Report Review
And the ending.
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Oh wow! :D That last part I did not see coming. Woah, LOL. Other than that it was amazingly detailed I might add? ;] Great job!Author's Response: Haha my UNCLE of all people helped me out with the twist at the end.
"Okay, Pete; where did they have sex?!"
"Be a bit more spontaneous than that!"
Thanks so much for reviewing :D I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
Haha, brilliant! I actually laughed out loud at the end of this. Typical Sirius =PAuthor's Response: Aha, thank you! :D Glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
Woop! Well written! Great writing, your characterisation and story telling abilities are great! A young Sirius really interests me and you did it well! The plot is fun and I jus wanted to keep laughin! Jessiy xAuthor's Response: Awh, thank you so much, Jess! You're so sweet. It was actually kinda hard for me to write this one-shot but it was worth it in the end; Had fun all the same (:
I've always wanted to write something short about a 20 year old Sirius and this is what I came up with! Thanks again, love (; Report Review
Wow, that was intense haha. Very very good! I like the man talk going on :) and how at twenty years old, it's like they've never grown up and they're still those rebellious guys from Hogwarts. Couldn't Sirius and Marlene have waited an hour? Couldn't they? Lol, it wouldn't have been half as exciting but imagine the next people to use those seats. I'm never going to a movie theatre again, haha. Siriius, I can't believe you didn't tell me about Love To Hate.or did you? Well, I'm going to have to read that when I get some spare time. I should really be studying right now *sigh*
Great job!Author's Response: Hey hey Morgan! :D Rofl, the man talk ... Loved it too! I got the idea for this one-shot from my uncle and his friends, and no, it wasn't a past experience they were talking about! :L Ah no, Marlene, in this, is just as bad as our dear Sirius :D Ew ew, gross. I agree with you on that one! I don't think I'll be going back to the movies anytime soon (: Unless they had an arrow pointing down at the seat saying "Sirius Black sat here." Um, I can't remember if I did or not o.o Maybe I did, but read it in your own time if you want ;D I should be studying too, finals in a week and 3 days D: Thanks so much for reviewing! You made my day ;) Report Review
You are my new favourte author!
That was great and again i agree with the other review saying Sirius was written just as imagined. It was brilliant i have also read the love/hate story which is also equally as good. I will review, that soon i havent finshed reading it all though. So far i like it though.
I recognise Marlene McKinnon. Hmmm... Cant think what i recognise her from? Is she an original character from Harry Potter? I will have too dig the old books out!
She wont be now, you will have made her up from scratch... :S
Even So... Really Good story and i will review the other ones too (:Author's Response: Haha, wow! :D Mighty big compliment; thanks! Sirius talked about Marlene McKinnon with Harry in OotP at the train station when he showed him the photo of the Order (: I just .. used her instead of making up a character; it was easier :D Thanks so much for reviewing; I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
Oh my god.
I seriously just laughed for like five minutes sucessively.
That was good!Author's Response: Aw thank you! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it; I'm not mad about it .. was very hesitant to submit it but meh, may aswell! Thanks for reviewing! (: Report Review
You wrote the exact Sirius from my head...if you get what I mean
this was brilliant =]Author's Response: Hmmm I think I know what ya mean ;) No! I do actually know what you mean xD
Thanks so much; I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D Report Review
Hahaha lovely endingAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you! :D Report Review
That was really funny! I wasn't expecting the last bit at all! I was expecting him to say that him and Marlene had done it on James's couch, where they were all sitting, or something like that. I lol-ed so hard haha. Seriously, really great story =]Author's Response: Thanks so much, love ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it; I was very hesitant to submit it but I did it anyways :D Report Review
Okay.wow well. this wasn't exactly what I expected! Oh god I your writing! :D Your always for the twists huh? That was so amazing. I personally like how you wrote everyone. It was very good and funny! :D I loved it. Though the ending...was so not what I expected! I thought they were at his or her house not in a movie theater! But thats just another new accomplishment for Sirius Black. I love this one shot. Its funny :DAuthor's Response: Thanks Jazzy(: I love ze twists. I would write a longer response but my mood isn't the greatest, I'm a mess right now. Report Review
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