OOHH! This is so exciting! I don't think I've ever been more disappointed upon seeing there wasn't another chapter!!
They just agreed to have mindless sex in the room of requirement!! Damn Hermione! I wanna -
Okay, I probs shouldn't finish that sentence...
But anyway, please update; this hormonal,teenaged, draco-loving brain of mine is yearning for another chapter.
xx Report Review
Really like this. But remove the dam curse already lol
Great dialogue bro! Report Review
Very interesting to have Hermione and Draco hooking up in the midst of his struggle to kill Dumbledore. I wonder if they'll have a happy ending...I sure hope so. Keep writing! :) Report Review
This is a very promising story, I certainly will be following it. :)
How long are you planning this story? Report Review
oh wow! i LOVE this fan fiction. it is amazing. it is long chapters. it is just AWSOME!! please hurry up and update soon!! Report Review
really like this story so far. please update soon! Report Review
i love how long the chapters are.. magical bets.. wow.. poor hermionie.. evil draco... hope she wins!! Report Review
This is a brilliant story so far, please update soon! Report Review
I like it; I like it a lot.
Update please :) Report Review
It's an excellent introductory for your new, and may I say original, story. Keep up the great work and I, most definitly, am looking forward to the next chapter! Report Review
I absolutely love this story, the whole betting thing, and how Ronald doesn't really care about Hermione's feelings.
Please continue, I can't wait to continue reading! Though, I wish there was some more description to go with the large amount of dialogue.Author's Response: Thank you very much! Your comments mean a lot. I so happy you enjoyed it. The next chapter is finished, but I already have a new story waiting in the validation queue, so I have to wait to submit it, but it shouldn't be too long---so keep your eyes open. :)
As for the description, I know what you mean, the earlier chapters were written a while ago, and I've been doing my best to add more description since then, the next one up might be similar, but after that they should improve description wise. I just get so consumed in the dialogue...:) Report Review
FINISH THIS STORY... ITS SO FRIKIN GOODAuthor's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is finished and just waiting to go in the queue. :) Report Review
Hey- that was really good! The plot's original, and your writing is brilliant. Keep it up- update soon! =) 10/10Author's Response: Wow, thank you very much! I'm happy you enjoyed it. The next chapter is finished, but I already have a new story waiting in the validation queue, so I have to wait to submit it, but it shouldn't be too long---so keep your eyes open. :) Report Review
This was great to read!
You have an original plot and you have stayed true to the characters.
Cant wait to read another chapter, update soon!Author's Response: Thank you very much! I so happy you enjoyed it. The next chapter is finished, but I already have a new story waiting in the validation queue, so I have to wait to submit it, but it shouldn't be too long---so keep your eyes open. :) Report Review
That was very good! I loved it! You set it up brilliantly. Draco deserved what Harry and Ron did to him but Ron needs to be punished too. Update soon and let me know when you do. Report Review
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