Ahh, I love this story so much, I swear this is the fourth time I've read it but strangely only the first time I've reviewed :/
I just wanted to say that I have read this as well as your Lily in the Moonlight story and I loved them both but I still think that you should add more to the story. I would love for you to make another sequel, perhaps about Hope, Kit and Ollie and their time at Hogwarts. I would love a story about the next next generation (if you get what I mean;) )
Basically I just want to tell you that I love this story, it is probably one of my favourite stories ever, and that I would love to read more and more of your work... keep writing and I give this story 10/10 :)
GabriellaGMW Report Review
This was a great story! Pelase keep writting as you are an amazing writer. I read this on the suggestion of a friend. normally I dont read next generation stories as I find them boring, or less interesting than a good Dramione, but this was amazing and still had lots of dramione. Report Review
Loved this chapter and the ones before! I just couldn't stop reading!! I really enjoyed going in Lily's mind, it was quite fun, and I suspect Rose is pregnant? Report Review
I like your story so far, but I'm REALLY impatient to
see when Violet discovers she's related to the
Potter/Weasley clan. Report Review
:O amzing im writing a dersley son, this is amazing though :D Report Review
Thanks for making me laugh after a particulary horrible day. Love your sense of humour and the way that you've integrated a completely new character so seamlessly into the HP cannon. Not sure about Ron and Hermione being kind of estranged? Will have to see about that, but continuing a great read. Report Review
This is so awesome! I loved it.. I think you should write more of the Lily/Teddy story, see how it all works out, what everyone thinks of their relationship. how Harry and Ginny react to it.
Anyways, I very much enjoyed this..
Lenny xAuthor's Response: I did write the sequel about lily teddy, hope you enjoyed it xx Report Review
SO GOOOD!! I loved it, the characters were brilliant, you made the fact that vi was Dudley's daughter work out wonderfully! Congrats! Can't wait to start the sequel! Report Review
I didn't only like this story, I loved it!
Now I would like to ask for your permission to translate this incredible story of yours into german and post it on the 2. greatest Harry Potter Fanfiction Board in german language.
I would - of course - post it with your name as author and if possible with a link to the english original.
You can contact me via mail, if you like: kristinadeutsch1411@googlemail(dot)com
Last i just want to wish you a sunny day!
NinaAuthor's Response: yeah sure you're welcome to if you like :) xxx Report Review
He's around twenty three. She's thirteen. I see a problem. but I really do like this story. Report Review
Ah but its not Scorpius' kid. Its our industrious Head Boy... Joe. Dun dun dun. Poor Violet just has tunnel vision. Report Review
Im gonna try to figure this out. Demetrius Riddle. Obviously Voldemort's son. (gah). cousin to Scorpius. Therfore either the son of Andromeda or Bellatrix. I highly doubt its Andromeda, so I'm gonna assume that its Bellatrix and Voldemort's, for lack of a better word, Love child. Though I think that Voldemort was incapable of sexual interaction. He had lost so much through splitting his soul so many times. But this is an interesting plot twist. Its obvious that something is going on with Draco and Hermione. And that makes me happy. Rose's character is kinda annoying. And the whole getting pregnant thing isnt a good thing for her right now. But with all the stuff you've got going on in this story, I'm surprised you can keep it all straight. I love it so far.Author's Response: wow am glad you liked it, thanks for the long review, is nice to come back to, I havent been on this website in ages. Yeah Demetrius is the fruit of Bellatrix's adoration and Voledmort's boredome, also he is a bit of a manipulative sadist. I did rose badly, she is meant to be not too annoying, just faulted, but instead she goes from irritating to perfect. Hope you continued liking it xx Report Review
Now, we arent in Arkansas. they are cousins! lol. Report Review
you have a true skill and i am so sorry but your work is so good i may not review for a while because i want to read it all (sorry) (Hugs & kisses) (mabye not the kisses thats wierd) Report Review
amamazzzinng (that was amazing really drawn out like) you are by far one of the best writers i have seen Report Review
well my plan to review every chapter failed... ITS AMAZING! end of review. Report Review
wow this is an amazing story and its just the first chapter! great idea. im going to try to review every chapter but forgive me if i dont! i think this story deserves it! Report Review
Doesn't this mean that Scorpius and Violet will be related??? Report Review
Hmmm.. so far I really like your story. I would strongly suggest editing it, as there are a lot of grammer errors (such as where and wear, and their, there, they're) and names getting confused. You do realize they're fourteen right? Fourteen and pregnant. But that is the only thing I don't like. Oh and the Draco Hermoine thing, but thats just me.
PS, is Dudley going to ever be in the story again? He seemed like a pretty important character in the beginning.Author's Response: wow, my first honest review in ages. Yes there are a ton of mistakes, but going back to review them would make me realise quite how awful it was. Yes she is 14 and pregnant, it is meant to be shocking. Dudley does return, but badly. Dramione are actually okay in this story, if not really that believable. Also you may want to notice that most of the romance and kissing scenes are not very good either, but I was about 13 1/2 when I wrote this and totally inexperienced in both writing and life. Hope you didn't hate it too much (or anywhere near as much as I do) and thatnks for your honesty xx Report Review
ahhh the way you've been developing this story is just. . .gah! i think I'm in love! i really like all of the subtle and believable changes that you've made, it's the perfect mixture of change and familiarity! it's really quite charming so far and i really can't wait for all the action to kick in! Report Review
omg its so good :) brilliant ending
i hope you still check these reviews even though i kind of missed the boat, just want to say i love the story :D
I cant wait to read the sequel, and plese keep writing, you're really good! Report Review
WOW! That is an interesting twist a Malfoy being in Gryffindor while A Potter ends up in Slytherin! Great job with sticking to the Epilogue tho! Report Review
i like the 'no note! Hope gone!' part kinda like the second film.
I love it xx xD xDAuthor's Response: yeah, that was intentional, glad you liked it x Report Review
'mazing story I Author's Response: lol, thanks x Report Review
What a great little story you have here. I really enjoyed it. Great charaters. Will read some of your other works as well.Author's Response: thanks, hope you enjoy the others so much Report Review
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