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Review #1, by Tragedy The Letters and the You-Know-Where

3rd August 2003:
Both stories I\'ve read of yours are hung up on clothing and looks. In the wizards world, they wear robes, at Hogwarts they wear uniforms. Just something that bugged me. Other than that you\'re writing is good. VERY similar to JKR\'s, so you might want to try and break away from that. Very good though, keep updating.

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