Pretty good, especially given your dyslexia and the fact that English isn't your first language! Very interesting to see Draco's life in the epilogue from his POV.Author's Response: thank you so much.
i try as best as i can, my mother is actually english, so english falls a bit natural to me.
well yeah i plan to wright a story form his pov.
hopwe you read my others stories to :) Report Review
Second time I read this (or third maybe, if you count when you wrote it at school) =P And I really love it! I nearly had tears in my eyes there for a sec!
You could write a new chapter for this one, you know. To show how Scorpius takes it all and stuff, right? I think you should =D =P
New banner coming up in just a few minutes =DAuthor's Response: hehe yeye :D heh thank you but it's not that good and you know it. i'm not so good at wrighting i just think it's fun to wright and if anyone likes it thats just fun :D
hehe maybe i could. and maybe i should, i don't know. i'm really not sure. but i'm wrighting another story, about malfoy which you know all about.
hehe yeah did you like the new banner ? well of cours you did, because you made it :D
thanx again :D Report Review
Yeah you probably should write more it's really good unlike my stories, well people think it's good but, oh whatever it's a good story.♥Author's Response: hehe thanx :) but it's not that good you know ...
well i'm writghing a nother malfoy stroy now, it's about Dracos daughter, but i have been thinking about giving the one shot a sequel, i'll just have to wait and see. Report Review
Hi! Just dropping by to give you a review =] How could I not after all the awesome support you've given my story?!
I really liked this one-shot, actually... I've never read a story from Draco's POV and it was interesting. Of course there are some grammar problems here and there but that's to be expected, right? So no worries...
Well, I hope your review box feels better now! Here, I'll give it lots of love *pours all her love into Lily's review box* there we go, all better!
Okay, talk to you later!!! And great job =]
~CBGAuthor's Response: hey:)
thanx for the lovely rewie :) it's always fun to read your rewives because it makes me and my rewive box happy :)
welll thats good to here that you liked it i mean :)
well yeah i guess so.
then my english teacher has done a poorly jib because the only thing he said i had done worng was some names and he said he couldn't undersatnd who different persons was but i guess when you haven't read the book it get's that way ;P
well thanx again for your lovely rewive :)
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This is great! :D Love it! You could probably write more. I promise I'd read it all! :p And I bet I'd love it! As I love all your stories! Please put out the one about Dom! :p
Keep up the great work, darling!Author's Response: hehe thank you :)
well i'm going to i just have to transalte it form norwegina to english and that can take somtime:)
but thank you Report Review
You should tlk more bout Lily/ scor. you mention it once
but otherwise good goodAuthor's Response: hehe thanx
well it was a school parer and i couldn't write any longer but maybe i should write a sequel on it.
thanx for the rewive :) Report Review
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