Uh... Weird. I don't really get it but, it ya know... ok... I guess...
8/10

Author's Response: I guess I'll take that as a compliment... I'm a weird person, so weird is what comes out on paper (screen).

Thanks for reading;

Brenda(g)Potash ^O-O^

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PLEASE MAKE A SEGUAL

Author's Response: I'll try to finish this one up first... thanks for the review, thanks for reading.

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Hi snoopygonewilder
Dat defnitely was a very-very indigenous idea, it was nicely written but, would have been more fun with Ron and Hermione there. Overall, a real good attempt and d ending to it was nice.
-Aashna

Author's Response: thank you, I'll try to include Hermione and Ron next time, if I have time to write some more with summer vacation from school.

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LOL. Brilliant!! I laughed so hard my eyeliner smudged. Thank you for a terrific read. Keep up the good work! 20/10

Author's Response: thank you... I wanted it short and sweet to the point.

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Haha I liked this a lot! Very creative. Just watch out for some grammatical things. But really, great job =)

Author's Response: thank you, and yes I'm the horror of the land of grammar, thank god for editors... haha

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This was utterly brilliant! Absolutely amazing, and so funny!

A very clever way of breaking the 'Fourth Wall' and making Harry a brat was very interesting to the way us readers percieve his character. I suppose it is never really specified whether he enjoys the fame or not, he doesn't like people looking at his scar, but thats really all the hype is about anyway I guess.

Well done, this is now marked as a favourite! Keep up the great ideas!

Author's Response: Thank you, I figured it would be hard for any teenager to not let it go to his head, if not just a little bit, and well the "Author" she's had enough of his bratty ways, not enough to write him out of a story though.

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Haha that was hilarious. Good job!

Author's Response: thank you for reading.

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