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Review #1, by Kira And So It Starts....

18th July 2012:
An interesting start for a story. I always think its interesting when new people arrive at Hogwarts. If you can help it, I would recommend not putting so much space between paragraph breaks. It just helps the whole story flow better if everything is neat and even. I also think the strength of this story is going to be the dialogue and character interactions. Make sure you don't rush yourself and that you give your characters enough time and space to develop naturally. I think this story has great potential so be sure to keep up writing! I would really like to see more!

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