Fantastic! This is the best Marauder fic I have read in a long time. Very well written with some great details.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it! Report Review
This was well gory! Good but Gory! And some serious mother son action going on there, she really was a crazy old bat! And you caught that alright!
Again, fab story, it made me cry in the end!Author's Response: Yes, i thought years of abuse would suit well with Sirius, he always had that air of defiance, the will and the need to help others that might be in pain no matter the cost.
Thank you again Zephyrus! Report Review
I found a couple of typos:
I think you need to re-learn your manors = manners
but winced ad fell back again = and
But other than that it was amazing! Really well written and a lot of emotion.Author's Response: Thanks so much for pointing them out, I shall go back and sort them as soon as possible!
Thanks for your review, i'm glad you enjoyed the emotion, I particularly liked writing the brotherly scenes between James and Sirius.
Thanks! Report Review
Oh. My. Gosh. that was such an emotional fanfic.
one of the best i've EVER read. haha
it had such great imagery and so much emotion in it!
i even cried! good job. great job!
if only i could write half as well!Author's Response: Aww thank you so, so much for such a lovely and heart warming review!
I'm so very pleased that you enjoyed it! Report Review
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