7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Harry and Ginny `Eff My Life

27th April 2009:
hmm i think this needs a sequel because this story is great.^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm thinking about the sequel, and there probably will he one, I'm just not sure when it'll bs up :)

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Review #2, by lilyevans12 `Eff My Life

26th April 2009:
beautifully written, keep writing

Author's Response: Thanks, it means alot. :]

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Review #3, by Phoenix_feather94 `Eff My Life

16th April 2009:
Just a few things: 1. In the first paragraph it starts off with Lily saying 5 MONTHS and then goes to 5 WEEKS; 2. At a guess you are probably American, but in Australia, Rooting isnt a term used for barracking or cheering, so you may want to change that cause it just sounds really bad to any Australian who reads this. - Thats pretty much all. I loved the story in general though & you should definitely write a sequel, or you could just continue this one.

Author's Response: Oh, I know it's a confusing sentence, but what I was trying to say was Lily never got to hold on to a guy longer than 5 weeks, but with Jayden, she managed to hold on to him for 5 months. I'll try to re-word it. And thanks so much, I'll be changing the "rooting" part to cheering. Thanks soo much :)

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Review #4, by JKRowlingFan22 `Eff My Life

14th April 2009:
Haha, PLEASE write a sequel. I love it :) It had an excellent plot and the characters were hilarious! Keep on writing!
JKRowlingFan22

Author's Response: aww, thanks! And I got this idea from a book xP
keep an eye out for the sequel!


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Review #5, by Jellyman `Eff My Life

14th April 2009:
Oh, I loved it, it flowed nicely and it was very clear and believable. Very nicely done, definitely sequel worthy :) I wonder what James will do?

Author's Response: Thanks, and we'll see what James will do soon. Keep a good eye out for the Sequel!

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Review #6, by DeliriousforSirius `Eff My Life

10th April 2009:
Haha! Hey, it's DeliriousforSirius from TDA :-)

I really loved this, I think you should write a sequel definantly! And I have read Maxime Ride, but not in a while so I can't help you with remembering which book.

This is actually one of the only short-stories I've actually enjoyed! Maybe you should make this the first chapter of a novella or something. . .

Author's Response: ha, figured since you guys have the same name :)
i'm not so sure about a novella, but probably a short story. now i must work on the sequel :)


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Review #7, by 23OHPD `Eff My Life

10th April 2009:
please, please, PLEASE write a sequel! it was really good, I want to know what happens next.

Author's Response: thanks!! but i'm not sure if i'm goin to write a sequel :]

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