this was soo cute!!
I was thinking that the worst happened to poor Lily when she screamed, but it was only a stupid thorn. phew!

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ha very nice. keep writing, your very good.

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Hey there Liza and Sara :) It's Laura here to review! Woo hoo.

Aw, this is sucha cute idea. I really liked it. It was so sweet. Definitely fluff, but still it was really beautiful. I liked how it showed their relationship and how much they loved each other. It was nice to see a version of the potter children where they weren't like- "the populars, ruling hogwarts" or whatever. It seemed very real.

The only thinkg I have to say is perhaps you could work on description. I liked that it was short and I think that worked really well, but what I mean is that you could add in a little more description to pad at the empty spaces between dialogue and stuff. Apart from that, beautiful :)

xx Laura

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Naaw this was so cute. Albus cares about his sister and that's so brotherly ;) really liked it girls ;D

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Awww!! Haha. This was so cute and adorable. The end was so sweet.

I really enjoyed this. It really lightened my mood and made me so happy! Soo cute!

Thsi was aamzing! Perfection!

10/10

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Aw! This was cute. I can't help but feel sorry for Al. :( He's trying so hard tobe a good big brother. This is a great story. Nice job! 10/10

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V e r y n i c e!
I feel robotic today!

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