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Review #1, by readoholic There's Nothing To Do Around Here

22nd June 2010:
I'm really enjoying this! I really like your style of writing; it's not too pacy, nor slow moving - just right in that respect. The intimate details of your characters are beginning to shine through, which I think is just right. I thought that just maybe I wanted to see a bit more of Scorpius/Rose before the whole Lily/Scorpius thing, and maybe we could be told a bit more about Lily's character before she says what she does at breakfast? But that's just my personal suggestion and really isn't a big issue at all.
As I say, I'm enjoying the flow and I liked both of the first too chapters very much. I'm really looking forward to your next update on this one!

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Review #2, by alic3D011 Daily Prophet: Day 1

11th May 2009:
ok so is this a rose/scor or a lily/scor

personally i enjoy lily/scor

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Review #3, by Childish_Fairy Good Morning...

5th April 2009:
Scorp and Rose are so adorable!
Lily needs to be over the head though, that was mean!
I didn't think it was cheesy, I liked it!
10/10

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Review #4, by killjoy Good Morning...

4th April 2009:
Great start so far.Lily is a bit of a bitc.uhh not so nice of a person here

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