please please update soon, cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm attempting to update it right now!

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ooh an angry juliette

Author's Response: Yeah don't cross her mad. She's lethal.

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you cant help but love dumbledore

Author's Response: He's just so amusing. What is he doing? Why is he so whimsical about everything?!

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love this chapter too!!

Author's Response: :) Thank you! I'm glad!

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loved the fight scene

Author's Response: Thanks! That has got to be the shortest action scene i've ever written. Believe me there will be many more. Thank you for reviewing!

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stupid stupid bellatrix

Author's Response: You'll grow to loathe her by the end of this...

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have i mentioned i love your story

Author's Response: No you haven't but i'm glad you do!

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i love how this story is so different to the typical ones

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate that! I'm really trying to make this as original as possible!

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you're good at slipping bits in, now i wanna know what happened between juliette and bellatrix

Author's Response: It's hard to let just a glimpse of what happened come out subtly without giving away what happened entirely. Thank you for reviewing!

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gripping first chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it.

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Cool, she got in. So that mean's she'll run into Sirius right?

Author's Response: It might.*Smirk*. Thank you for reviewing?

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Nice start.

Ps: Lorenzo sounds hot for some reason...

Author's Response: I was thinking of Taylor Lautner and Hayden Christensen when I wrote him.

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She's kind of cold. Is she ever going to let loose?

Author's Response: Good question with a very complicated answer.

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Wait so is Remus protecting her for Dumbledore or for Sirius? Oh I don't know!

Author's Response: I guess you'll have to wait and find out...Thank you for reviewing!

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LOVE THIS STORY! KEEP WRITING!

Author's Response: I will thank you for reviewing!

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Okay I like this story but this chapter is really anti-climatic. Bring on the confrontation already. You keep hesitating and then not bringing it. I understand you are trying to draw it out but enough's enough.

Author's Response: I know, I know, I know I will! Thank you for reviewing!

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oh my god! the next chapter will be totally awesome! julie is #3? wow all i kno is that some good stuffs gonna happen...i like remus hes so kind. lol julie and sirius r going together thats gonna be really interesting. i dont have time to write a full review SORRY! so i'll come back later :-). i just wanted to be the first reviewer! anway plz write soon i love this story and was waiting for days for it 10/10

Author's Response: I will update the next one ASAP! Thank you for reviewing! I love reviews and it makes me sad when people don't do it.

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I'm not actually reviewing this story and I'm sorry for doing this this way but I dont know how else to ask you this but are you ever going to bring back your story Lie to me? I'm pretty sure you were the one who was writing it. Anyways, it was one of my favorite stories on here and I was wondering if you had any plans to bring it back at some point or not? Thanks.

Author's Response: Yes I am. It actually is the sequel to the story you are currently reviewing. The reason i took it out was so i could make it go along with this one. It will be back very soon. I've saved the chapters I already wrote and I'm just going to tweak them a bit to fit the story line I've created. I apologize for deleting it.

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see i read ALL THE CHAPTERS! in only took a month.btw does remus know about tete-da-tete?

Author's Response: Good job! You will find out about Remus in the next chapter!

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yes who doesn't love the wisdom of dumbledore? great flashback at the beginnig. You missed a "you" in this sentence: "Then I could kiss until you awoke and.."

Author's Response: Thank you! I fixed it.

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Opening scene, I told you you could write good romance novels. BTW, I would so be all over lorenzo if were her im thinking of him as a older, sexier taylor lautner? Also, I think that in this sentence: "I’ll go get some to retrieve you" you meant someone...

Author's Response: I don't know where that is so i guess i'm not going to be able to fix it. And yes I did actually model him after Taylor.

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as always loved the opener, you need to put in some french translations for us who are french-challenged. also you mean consolation...constellation is stars honey bunches of oats. and btw who is renee based on.see ya later my fine feathered friend!

Author's Response: .*smirk* i waited for you to read that. I did that on purpose.

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LOVED the chapter.The part i liked the best was the flashback at the beginning...so far that is my favorite part of your chapters

Author's Response: Thanks mo-fay!

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i know i am being really cryptic but I love where the story is going...there is onle one sentence i would like you to fix

"His heart clenched painfully and it felt the same as when the family healer used to test his blood pressure on his arm by tightening his grip on his arm until he couldn’t handle it and his arm turned purple"

This is WAY too long and over complicated.

Author's Response: I just took it out. Thanks for your glorious thoughts.

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I'm really liking your story.it looks like you took your time on making the plot line. In the first sentences you said minutes instead of seconds, just so you know. I hope you read this before you kill me for not reading them.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and i fixed the mistakes i made.

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