i like this story
its very different from all the others i have read
i like the way its more centred around a slytherin
good job keep it up
xx

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your compliment. =)

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Another good chapter. I liked how you picked things up two years later, and Laetitia's reaction to Sirius was fantastic. As was your characterizations of the Marauders, though, I can't help but feel a tad sorry for Peter. Guess I'm just a sucker that way!

The tone again was great, had that sharp bite to it, which I admire. There was a little bit of verb confusion that affected the flow, but other than that, I really liked it.

Author's Response: And another review! LOL! *hugs* Thank you again! I have a love for the Marauders, and I always saw Peter as a bit of a suck-up to James and Sirius. Maybe he'll change throughout the story. I'm not sure yet. ^__^
I'll try to keep a close eye on my verb usage/grammar. Thank you for the (second) review.

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Interesting first chapter. I always like reading people's perspectives about Regulus and Sirius, and yours was rather nice. I think your characterizations are very good, and your writing has an abounding flow to it. 'Black, green and white would make up her life.' - I really liked that line, had a certain foreshadowment to it? Anyway, great start ;)

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, love! I'm glad you like how I portrayed Sirius and Regulus. I really like those two. I always love anything to do with Blacks. Haha. And yes - that line was supposed to hint which house she would end up in. ;D Again, thank you!

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