What did she say?
I started reading this today and I love it!
Oh god. PLEASE UPDATE?
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I think she either kisses Natty or tells him she's in love with Teddy. Also, I hate the friends. She should move to Beauxbatons or something, and come back for a interschool tournament or the like... but Teddy is in seventh year so that wouldn't work.
Actually that's a really cool storyline! Victoire moves to France to get away from mean schoolmates and her childhood best friend who was really horrific to her during school, and when she comes to back she's beautiful and the star of her new school! And then Teddy can chase her, but in the end she turns him down and moves on because she realises she is above the petty bullies of her past, even though Ted has improved dramatically since they last met. Personally, I hate it when the main female character forgives the male lead for something really bad. My least favourite storyline is the one where a girl gets kidnapped by a guy that she soon falls in love with, and he realises his mistake and frees her. Like, WTF? It's called Stockholm Syndrome... Google it.
Seriously. It's bloody interesting.
But I digress. A lot, actually :D
Update? I don't know where to go from here! Report Review
still waiting for the next amazing chapter! Report Review
still awaiting the next chapter. Report Review
SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!! THIS STORY IS SO GOOD!! Report Review
Really good chapter :) and great story so far so please update soon i wanna know wat happens!!!Author's Response: There will be an update shortly! :) Report Review
I really love this story but I would love it even more if you could update a we bitty faster :) even if all that happens is Teddy gives Victoire flowers ! Thanks for an amazing story thoughAuthor's Response: Ugh, I know. I'm so sorry. I feel like it's excuse after excuse but at the end of the day, school always comes first :( Report Review
i am so confused does she get with matty or teddy?
anyway so dann good
cant wait to read moreAuthor's Response: Well, we don't know who she 'gets' with, now do we? Hm... *cackles evilly* Report Review
ding dong dang brilliant
love it love it love itAuthor's Response: ding dong dang THANKS! :) Report Review
Is Nathaniel gay? Cause I can't tell if he likes Vic that way or not. I really want him to be okay. And Vic needs to make up with emily and kristen, and maybe find some better friends.
Please update!!!Author's Response: You want him to be gay? Cause I'm gonna let you know he's not. I'd really like to write a gay character but Nathaniel's not it... :/ Report Review
I really LOVE this! Your writing is absolutely hilarious! Victories narration makes my day, and this plot is so interesting! Update soon please!Author's Response: Having trouble with the next chapter, but it will be written! I'm determined! *shakes fist in air* Report Review
This chapter was so sad :( her friends do kinda suck, though.
But I LOVE Nathaniel!!! He's such a sweetheart and a great person and I hate that they got into a fight!
I'm also pretty sure he's in love with Victoire. And I'm slightly conflicted because I don't know that I like Teddy better than him...I mean I love Teddy, but Nathaniel is just SO AWESOME. Of course Victoire should be with Teddy, but I feel bad for Nathaniel. He needs someone to love him :)
I hope they make up soon. It's really sad that she doesn't really have friends anymore.
Please update soon :)Author's Response: I know, but there always needs to be a FML moment in a story ;) Aha, I actually love Nathaniel. I've never been one for bad boys ;) I'll update soon! I kinda got carried away with my other story, but I'll write this one for sure! Report Review
Oh my god, you are the worst updater in the history of the universe. WORK ON THAT IF YOU WANT REVIEWS. Please. This story is coming along swimmingly, if I may say so, and I would appreciate if you would just HURRY UP AND GET ON WITH IT. This is almost 3 years old...and, yup, only 9 chapters. Disappointing :(
I like Nate the best. Dear old Nathaniel. He needs a girlfriend. *cough blatant hinting cough* And Teddy is an absolute jerk. Vic is okay, but she gets a little...confusing. Taking things that aren't important seriously and not sticking with her decisions and stuff. She changes her mind so much. I feel so bad for Emily! But, wow, she lost her virginity after a week? Still. Poor girl. :( I kind of (really) want Vic to do some breaking-of-Teddy's-heart for revenge for Emily. :p
I enjoy those little flashbacks about Victiore and Teddy's younger years very much. More please?
I will review...whenever the hell you decide to update. Ciao!
CatAuthor's Response: Um, I really don't have a good excuse to why it takes me so long. But life's been really crazy the past few years for me, which is why I started writing in the first place, just so I could get life off my mind. I know, I find Victoire infuriatingly fickle, but what can you do?
Next chapter shouldn't be too long. Give me a couple of weeks? :D Report Review
I really like the story! Its well written, the voice is well developed and its funny! I can't wait to read the next chapter!Author's Response: Woo! I'm glad you like the writing style! Keep on reading! :D Report Review
Loving this story. :) It's amazing because typically I don't think I'd go for characterizations of Teddy and Victoire like this, but you really pull it off. This chapter was great as usual.Author's Response: I hate the stereotypical Teddy/Victoire stories. They actually drive me nuts. I'm glad you like this though :D! Report Review
I say Victoire just runs off with Jones and they get married and ride off into their sunset.
Haha, I love Nathaniel. He's so sweet, so contemplative...but he's distinctly himself. He's firm too. :)
Really great chapter!Author's Response: Aha, that would definitely be cute :) I do love Nathaniel too, but I also like Teddy. I hate that one (or both) of them is/are gonna be hurt :( Report Review
SO GOOD. i like nat nad vic. they need to get together to make teddy realize that he is a ...*badword* haha. please please please update soon!Author's Response: I'll update ASAP! Hopeless is in the queue so look out for that! :D Report Review
Great chapter, loved it!!
I really can't wait to see what's going to happen next, please update as soon as you can. But don't worry, I know I can see how hard it must be to get it up quickly with all you've got going on. :)Author's Response: I know, but so many other authors do so well with putting up their stuff, I feel guilty :( I'm updating Hopeless next, so if you haven't, you should read that :D Report Review
I loved the last chapter!!! I feel so bad for Nathaniel, and for Victoire. Teddys so mean!!!Author's Response: It's just a pity party isn't it! :( Report Review
whgovnwoghowivmo you updated! aaah i'm soo glad!
i sort of don't get what's going on...did she feel something during the kiss, or is she lying when she says she felt nothing?
because i looove vic/ted and although i like the friendship between nathaniel/vic i really don't want a relationship between them! - VBAuthor's Response: Well Vic thinks she felt nothing, but she is very confused. If you hadn't picked up on it, Vic's very hard-headed but she isn't very decisive. Who knows!? I'm not even entirely sure how I'm going to end it, but I do have a good idea! Thanks for the lovely review! - (your initials are the same as mine!) Report Review
OH MY GOD YOU AREN'T DEAD! YOU ACTUALLY ARE ALIVE AND ABLE TO WRITE AN AMAZING CHAPTER! I MISSED YOU! PLEASE UPLOAD ASAPAuthor's Response: STILL ALIVE! Just in University now! ;) Ahaha, busy, busy bee. I will update once the next chapter is done! In the meantime, you should read my other story Hopeless *shameless plug in* Report Review
Woo hoo first review! So I'm a bit confused... Victoire has definitely reached her lowest point and can only come back up, right? But where is that 'up'? Is she going to end up with Teddy? Because it seems to me that she has a thing for Nathaniel :OAuthor's Response: Yeah, things kinda suck for Victoire right now. Nobody's really there for her. Well, Victoire's not really too sure about her feelings. Let's just say she's confused. She needs to figure things out. She definitely has /some/ feelings for Nathaniel, but she's not sure what. Report Review
Noo! Why you stop here! Update soon! I beg you ;-;
10/10Author's Response: The new chapter is in the queue! :D Report Review
Totally freakin amazing! I love this story sooo much. Your protrayel of the characters is just so well written and the plot is soo flawless:):) Update soon:)Author's Response: New chapter in the queue! :) Report Review
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! IMISS THIS STORYAuthor's Response: New chapter in the queue! :) Report Review
PLEASE write more! Your writing and dialogue is brilliant! I love this story so please don't stop updating until it's done!
Thanks so much. I'm sorry I didn't leave a comment on all the chapters, but I hope this makes up for it.Author's Response: New chapter is coming up! Report Review
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