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Review #1, by dani Just another argument- Chapter 1.

11th April 2009:
Hi! I think you have an excellent story here!!!

The only thing I suggest is to maybe get a beta reader because there are quite a lot of issues with commas and dialogue. Also, "order of the phoenix" should be capitalized like Order of the Phoenix.

I hope you end up posting more! It's a wonderful story. (:

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