why do I get the feeling that the admirer is Draco?Author's Response: maybe it is. maybe it isnt. =] we shall see Report Review
To be honest, I think your plot is in the right place, but you lack major detail. I think if you put your mind to it you could really be awesome at writing.Author's Response: alright ill admit i do lack major detail, but thats because i wrote this about a year ago and never went back to put in the stuff i was going to. after i post the whole story im gonna go back and add a lot more into it fresh =] Report Review
(: this is really good keep it up Report Review
Haha, this story rocks!!!
Please keep on going coz I love it so.
I give it 20/10!!!
=PAuthor's Response: haha thanks for the review. i already wrote out this whole story, im just waitin on them to be validated. i got plenty more chapters to come =] let me know wat u think once they get here =P Report Review
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