Beautifully written. I completely agree with you. THAT is exactly why Narcissa married Lucius. :) Report Review
i think a smiling lucius, would have been rather awkward, seeing as the malfoys have that sort of aura, as though to emphasise how they have no emotions. but i sort of like this. the way you described narcissa, as a victim of love, is wonderful.Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
This is great, I always like seeing different kinds of Narcissa/Lucius relationships. I thought it was really quite lovely, even though obviously sad!
I kinda wish it was more than just a one-shot but it works well the way it is! :) Anyway great story!
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Dude. It's really cool, I never thought much about Narcussus. But it's really goodAuthor's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
This is great! I Author's Response: omg its george! hahaha naww glad you liked it. thanks for reading :) Report Review
Excellent start! I'm really looking forward to the next chapters.
You captured Narcissa really wellAuthor's Response: Thank you! :) It's actually just a one-shot so I think that it'll be just the one story, but yeah. Glad you liked it though :D Report Review
Nice way to show why Narcissa stays with him and that Lucius wasn't so evil after all, just going down a very wrong path.Author's Response: That's what I was aiming for, so I'm glad to hear it worked. Thanks for stopping by! :) Report Review
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