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Review #1, by Emily The Train Ride

26th June 2009:
Interesting, looking forward to reading some more!

Author's Response: thanks very much :]

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Review #2, by lacewings The Train Ride

2nd May 2009:
This is amazing! You must update NOW. I love the way you describe how other people treat her - it's not over the top type bullying, it's little snide remarks, which is what teenagers really do. Descriptions are great, love the way she was clutching her fist. I wonder what disorder she has. probably some extreme anxiety disorder.

Author's Response: THANK YOU! that review has made me feel AWESOME! And now I want to update :D thankyouthankyouthankyou!!

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Review #3, by earthfarie The Train Ride

1st April 2009:
A Kingsley fic!! I'm very excited to see where this is going, as I think it's wonderful so far. :]

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you like it so far, I have huge plans for this fic :)

Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #4, by inkscribble The Train Ride

22nd March 2009:
Splendid. I think your writing is great and it's nice to see a story where Kingsley is at Hogwarts, I've never read anything like that before. I think the descrpitions and dialouge were great, and also the way Leah clenched her fists together hoping people wouldn't come in there. I'm not sure if I missed it or not, but have you mentioned what her disorder is yet? I think it'd be better if you got it out in the story asap rather than wait and let people find out since it seems to be a big part of Leah's character. Besides that, very nice!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I will most definitely add in what her disorder is asap. Thank yooou!

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