dude, ever heard of a silencing charm? lol, jk! Great story...poor Blaise!Author's Response: Haha, I never thought of that. Thanks for the review! Report Review
OMG that was good!
Amazing writing, i love how the feelings and words flow together perfectly! :)
Great story, yet again! Magnificently written! :)
From light_blueAuthor's Response: Again, thank you so much! You've made me smile so much with your reviews. I really, really appreciate all of them. And I'm very glad you liked it. :) Report Review
Hello love, I'm here to review. Sorry for the extensive delay :]
Rin, you AMAZE me. There is nothing that you cannot write if you set your mind to it. I'm in awe every single time I read something of yours. Next month should definitely be your month to be Author of the Month at TGS. You show an amazing ability to write and the writings that I read of yours seem to get better and better every time. You have expanded your range as a writer and that is truly something to be proud of.
Now, the story. It was AWESOME! The second read was even better than the first. How you used the words, "In, Out," as the centerpiece of the story, not to mention the title was brilliant! The atmosphere of the story is beautiful. It's not a cheap slash story, but a story of desire, of fantasy.
ShelbyAuthor's Response: Good gosh, Shelby, once again you have left me absolutely and wonderfully speechless. I mean... wow. Words cannot describe how happy you've just made me. I'm over the moon to think that I "amaze you." Really, it's... wow.
Anyway, I'm really, really glad you liked it. I... yep. Still speechless. Gah, I feel terrible now, because I cannot possibly come up with a response as good as your review. You flatter me, m'dear. ^__^ Thanks a billion, Shelbs. You know I absolutely adore you.
- Rin Report Review
This story is absolutely beautiful. You're a great writer. Please don't forget to credit for the banner :DAuthor's Response: Ah! I completely forgot. Sorry about that... But it's credited now. Thanks for reminding me...
And thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm really glad you liked it. ;) Report Review
Really good, especially if this is your first. I'd love you to continue the story and see the relationship develop. I like your style. Well done.Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! You have no idea what that means to me. I was really scared when posting this, just because it is my first. Thanks so much for the lovely review. Report Review
Just a few formatting issues. The top part is like triple spaced, but the bottom isn't. And you should put your summary in italics (you italacize italics by not italacizing). Actually, I like the chapter summary, you should use that for your summary summary, it's very good.
^_^None of that really matters. You know, just... ehh, whatever ^_^
You decided not to use Masks huh? --->I think I'm going to do a Dumbledore slash... maybe. Maybe I'll steal that name.
Anyway, great job Rin : )
PS you never told me what you meant by transitions.Author's Response: Yes! PM me when you get that up. That will be good. And formatting? I'll go in and check that out. Thanks for the lovely review. Report Review
i loved it and i love your writing style.
you are a very good writer (: Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it. It was my first Slash story, so I'm glad it came out OK. ^__^ Thanks again for the lovely review! Report Review
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