{reviewid: 2561177, reviewer: 'Dana'}
5th August 2011:
Awesome! That was a really cool chapter and youre really good at writing, especially Harry Potter!
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{reviewid: 2523161, reviewer: 'LoonyTranquillo'}
19th May 2011:
I love this...:D
When are you updating?
:P
In this Aditi Thomas is Parvati Patil's and Dean Thomas's daughter,right? :D
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{reviewid: 2490136, reviewer: 'Victoria%20LH'}
6th March 2011:
Hope youre still writing this I love Dursley stories!
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{reviewid: 2401403, reviewer: 'FriendofMolly'}
22nd August 2010:
Uht oh, that wasn't good. Why oh why did James go through Knockturn Alley? I would think it was someplace Harry would have made James promise to steer clear of. What was he thinking? I guess we'll find out when they get home. Please update soon.
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{reviewid: 2401398, reviewer: 'FriendofMolly'}
22nd August 2010:
Very entertaining. I will say that the Potter kids aren't as nice as I thought they'd be. Sure they grew up hearing Cruel Dursleys stories, but they can't blame Aurora for it. I got the impression from the Epilogue that Albus was a lot nicer than in this.
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{reviewid: 2401392, reviewer: 'FriendofMolly'}
22nd August 2010:
Sorry it took so long for me to revisit this one. I liked the humor. It's funny that James is so afraid of his mother, (well she can be scary), yet his father is so much more powerful. Well maybe he's just a softie when it comes to his kids. I'm going to read on.
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{reviewid: 2400331, reviewer: 'harryronhermione'}
20th August 2010:
I like it alot! Can't wait for the next update!
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{reviewid: 2400105, reviewer: 'Christina'}
20th August 2010:
Great chapter looking forward to the next
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{reviewid: 2399668, reviewer: 'Rowdy18'}
19th August 2010:
Cute story! Can't wait to see who the man is. More soon.
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{reviewid: 2384873, reviewer: 'Tricorvus'}
25th July 2010:
Very nice so far, I look forward to more of the same.
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{reviewid: 2384872, reviewer: 'Tricorvus'}
25th July 2010:
Thank U x 3! I tried this same thing, and mine sucked with a capital suck. Yours so far has filled the gaping holes that mine had, through which an elephant could have easily walked. Thank U for good punctuation, grammar & spelling.
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{reviewid: 2375760, reviewer: 'HufflepuffWoman'}
9th July 2010:
Great start but the second chapter is a bit short it would flow better had you combined the two chapters.
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{reviewid: 2375648, reviewer: 'phoenixy_friend'}
9th July 2010:
You wrote seen instead of scene.
The chapters could do with being a bit longer, and you ought to fix the spacing issues in the first.
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{reviewid: 2305254, reviewer: 'Kevin%20Kingsley'}
27th February 2010:
Straight to the story, no mucking around. I find it a bit simplistic for a stand alone, but think it would be a good beginning of a longer story. I liked it.
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{reviewid: 2192677, reviewer: 'wand_waver'}
13th August 2009:
I totally love it, especially the end!
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{reviewid: 2172530, reviewer: 'hplover_15'}
24th July 2009:
It's pretty good, I think I've read it before but it was different then, I think ♥
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{reviewid: 2172441, reviewer: 'Imog'}
24th July 2009:
Loved it, keep writing.
xxx
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{reviewid: 2107405, reviewer: 'kris'}
28th April 2009:
you had a good idea but i think you rushed through it. slow down. explain whats going on more in depth. give the characters time understand, comprehend, and respond accordingly.
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{reviewid: 2107039, reviewer: 'Harrypotterbiggestfanyet'}
27th April 2009:
This chapter is good.
You gt a good imagination.
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{reviewid: 2106941, reviewer: 'phoenixy_friend'}
27th April 2009:
i thought the book title was Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them
hooked already otherwise!
Author's Response: oops! I'll change that.
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{reviewid: 2088854, reviewer: 'FriendofMolly'}
4th April 2009:
Oh yeah! I've got to find of what more you have in store. You did a really nice job of this chapter. I'm hoping you have many more.
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{reviewid: 2088199, reviewer: 'Nightrunner'}
3rd April 2009:
Well! This should prove to be interesting.
(NOTE: The above has been nominated for a place of honor in the Understatement of the Year Club.) >ROFL<
Robert
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{reviewid: 2087780, reviewer: 'Sydney'}
3rd April 2009:
That was really good, I can't wait to read the next chapter. I think it would be very entertaining to read about Aurora at Hogwarts, she seems like quite the character.
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{reviewid: 2087771, reviewer: 'just%20me'}
3rd April 2009:
Cute story:) you write pretty well.
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{reviewid: 2087758, reviewer: 'clt_71'}
3rd April 2009:
Holy Cow! I can see so many possibilities spinning off from this! I definitely liked it. LOVED Vernon's reaction.
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