That's an incredible amount of stuff in just one chapter. Awesome! I really like your story so far, keep at it!
by the by, if you're still interested in "The Persistence of Memory" (I saw that you favorited it), it'll most likely be moving to my new account [fred is dead], since there isn't any sign of it becoming UnHidden after the validator told me they'd do just that... just keeping you updated for what it's worth :)Author's Response: It's meant to be a story of only 2-3 chapters, so it is sort of packed in. Thank you.
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Wow! good story! made me cry a bit but maybe dat was the sun in my eyes...or my moisturizer... anyway it was great! pls update!Author's Response: Thanks. Uh...I'm flattered?
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