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I love it! It made me cry a little then laugh a little then made me smile like an idiot. Best one shot ever! What's the name of the song? I love it! :DAuthor's Response: The song is We Danced by Brad Paisley, one of my favorites. Thanks for the review! Report Review
That was beautiful, lovelovelove
I like the constants, like Sirius speaking aloud.
I also really love that song.Author's Response: It's one of my favorite songs and I totally think Sirius has a brain-to-mouth problem. At least he got some better control of it later. Thanks for the review! Report Review
aww. . . that was really good. . . i have always wanted to write a story about the song We Danced Brad is my boy. . . i love him to death wich may be kind of creepy but thats okay. . . amazing i love it an i dont think i could have done as amazingly as u so glad u beat me to the punch. . . amazing story!Author's Response: I love Brad Paisley songs. They just always mean something, whether it's funny or deep. Thanks for the review! Report Review
aww that was so sweet you should totally have made that into a proper story so it didnt have to be so squished up i really enjoyed it =D
good job =D
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Wow, that was a fantastic story. Seriously. Wow. IT WAS AWESUM!!!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
That was the most adorable thing ever! I love it!! Definitely a favorite!!!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
This was amazing!!! I don't normally like song-fics, but this was breathtaking. Plus it made me cry =), that could just be because I'm practically in love in with Sirius Black, but I'll put it down to your amazing writing skills =D
One of the best things I've ever read on this site =) I'm now about to go and read some more of your stories, since you're obviously such an outstanding writer =)
10/10 =DAuthor's Response: I\\\'m sorry I made you cry. I cried too when I wrote it. Well, as close as I get to crying when I\\\'m reading/writing. Thanks for the review! Report Review
that was really sweet, I just love that song by brad paisley.Author's Response: I love that song, too. Thanks for the review! Report Review
I liked this so much! As soon as I saw 'Brad Paisely' I jumped eagerly into the story, because I just love him to death. :)
This way so much fun to read. I really liked the clumsy, mind-bumbling Sirius.
I think possibly my favorite part was the ending. I'm quite impressed by the way that you had the tragic death/Azkaban thing yet still had it end happily and believably. (People don't usually do that.) I seriously laughed at the last line! :DAuthor's Response: I really love Brad Paisley. One time, I bought ten of his songs on iTunes before I remembered I had a list that I was going to buy from.
Sirius was fun to write. He's essentially me and all my friends in male form: clumsy, voices-in-the-head, occasionally foul-mouthed, and easily distractable.
I couldn't make it totally AU, but I couldn't leave it sad. I'm a happy-ending kind of girl for the most part. Unless I haven't had sugar in a while or the story is mostly depressing.
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Aww... That was sweet. And I might know this song, too.Author's Response: It's one of my favorite songs. I was listening to it and the idea just hit me. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Congratulations, you made me cry.
Not sure if it was sadness at Sirius dying (again) or happiness because of what lay beyond the curtain for him =P
It's an absolutely beautiful story, and funny too.
I loved it =) 10/10Author's Response: I'm sorry I made you cry. I cried too when I wrote it. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Brilliant. Absolutely amazing. 10/10+. You took a small little detail and made it into something so easy to understand--something plausible. Amazing.Author's Response: I love taking the obscure things and people and turning them into something big, because it's so free and yet still tied to the basics. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Wow, that was brilliant. Funny and sad and sweet and heartbreaking, all at once :) It was gorgeous and I loved it! Well done :3Author's Response: I went through all those emotions and then some when I wrote it. Thanks for the review! Report Review
That's cute funny and sad! I'm totally feeling multi-feelings right now!
Kat xoxoAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
I really liked this one shot! It was so romantic and fluffy, in a good way. I love Dorcas, and was devastated when she died. But, I knew it had to be coming. I loved it when James was like, "Welcome to marriage. Your opinion means nothing now." And when Lily smacked him playfully and told James "Don't scare him." Also, when Sirius kept on thinking out loud and was saying damn it every time he thought out loud.Author's Response: Because it was before everything fell apart for Sirius, I could see him still being that fun-loving kind of guy, and James and Lily still having a picking-on-each-other kind of relationship. And everybody thinks out loud. Sirius just has a tendency to think the worng things out loud. Thanks for the review! Report Review
ahh, this made me smile
like this: (:Author's Response: Yay, I love making people smile! It makes me smile like this: :-) Thanks for the review! Report Review
Wow. That's...wow. LOVE IT!!!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
That was beautiful!
I don't even have any words.
It really got to me, seemed so real. I loved the little humourous bits too, and the examples in seperate paragraphs was a really good way of giving certain parts more impact.
I almost wished that it ended before all the sadness, but the ending was really sweet with that one place that's all theirs, so all in all, I loved it as a whole.
Awesome work, one of my favourites!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I tried to make it as real as possible but retain a certain kind of fun-loving, Sirius flavor. I thought of about five different ways I could have ended it, but that was the only one that seemed right to me. I swear, I almost cried while writing this. Thanks for the review! Report Review
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