Nice revisions! The old story was good, but this version is awesome! Report Review
pls update its a gud sory Report Review
loved it kat... loved it. nicely done job once again.
Magyk Report Review
pls update quick.dis story is really nice something diff nd original Report Review
Loved the rewrite kat! Made me fall in love with FLOM all over again! Report Review
Oh my god WOW, this story! I must say before anything else that this is infinitely better than the original. You have dramatically improved your writing, and this is much more gripping than before. I hope that you can keep it up, as you have a great plot but the original's writing did not do it justice in the way this seems to be.
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
10/10Author's Response: Thanks! I have matured a lot since I originally wrote this, and my writing has MAJORLY improved! Thanks for enjoying it!
Augie Report Review
I like it and all but you really should have made it longer.
It could have been really good.
~K.K~Author's Response: about that, it's not REALLY complete, i just accidentally put that instead of WIP. the next chapter should be up soon. Report Review
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