I am an identical twin, and this is well done! Congrats :) Report Review
aw that was cute and thank you because you just gave me a story idea!!! Report Review
I was reading your story, Missing Moments, and found this one too. It is beautiful and sad. Is it wierd that I think I know which peice of fan art you mean??? That peice of art is beautiful and heart-wrenching and I feel like this story puts those feelings into words quite adequately.Author's Response: Thank you so much. I found this fic quite hard to write, I'm better at humour, but when I saw that picture I had to do it. The picture was of George kneeling in front of a mirror and clutching at his reflection, if thats the one you mean. It just made me think how similar but different it was to how the mirror of Erised would be for George. Thanks again for reviewing :) Report Review
wow! that was sooo sad, I feel so bad for poor George, it must of been terrible to lose a twin- I know if I lost me twin I would crumble to a thousand pieces =(
I don't get the end part of it though, the Mirror of Erised is just one single mirror, wich was bought and moved away from Hogwarts, I think it was destroyed- I'm not sure, so how did Geoge get his hands on it?? It was a heart-renching but beautiful story.Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!
No, I didnt mean George got his hands on it, I meant that if he did look in the mirror of Erised he would see his relfection just as he is - beacuse what he desires is his twin, but it is a contradiction because he is not happy, if that makes sense!
Thankyou for your encouraging review :D Report Review
Pure Brilliance. You really captured grief in a creative and mature way. Well done =DAuthor's Response: Thankyou so much :D Report Review
Oh, this was so sad! The part at the end about the person he sees in the mirror almost brought tears to my eyes. But I really loved it - the whole thing about him having to see Fred everytime he sees his reflection. I also loved Fred's "comments." 10/10Author's Response: :D I'm glad you liked it! Thankyou Report Review
I'm sitting here fighting back the tears - that was brilliant. I can't even imagine what George must have felt like after losing Fred, and on top of that his family being as hurt and trying to help him. You did a great job with showing how he felt, and how hard it was for him to just look into a mirror. It was fantastic.Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review :D Report Review
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