Sorry for the uslessness of this rev., but im sick :/
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Thats really cute - i love OSO *snorts*
i was just as mean to my brother, but, unluckyly, i wasnt allowed to pick the name :/ lucky him, tho, otherwise hed probably end up being called Sirius, which, IMHO, is a lovely name ;)
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My favorite quote:"OW! You feathered piece of crap!" I could not stop laughing:) Report Review
hmmm,I'm not trusting Felicia at all,i want to believe her but really i mean come on,if someone fake puked on me id be getting revenge,somethings up.
And Al does he already realize hes madly in love with Reagan or is he denying it ?
Just checking is james in 7th,and Reagan and Al are in 6th?
post the next chapter up pronto. Report Review
aw, so cute. and shortish.
update, so i dont go insane, maybe?
i'll virtually hug you! and give you a virtual cake, and a virtual pet cat too!Author's Response: I love virtual cakes! Haha, I'm sorry it was so short, the new chapter will come soon(ish). Thanks for the review! Report Review
Hey, I just saw your story and thought it looked good =D
Before I go on to the next chapter I just wanted to say it is really refreshing to read a story where it starts off with the main characters as kids =] Its nice, and you personified a 10 year old really well. =P Reagan seems like a handfull!
- AmethystAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked it, and I hope you continue to like the rest! It doesn't stay with Reagan as a child, but I usually have at least one big flashback to her and Al's childhood, to help tell the story. Thank for the review! Report Review
wow! i love reagan...she's so cool! it's very well-written and funny!
plus, felicia. any hidden motives perhaps? i hope not. :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like Reagan, and I hope you got some good laughs. The next chapter will come in a bit; I hope you'll read it. Thanks for the review! Report Review
I really love this story and this chapter was fantastic! Please update soon!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoy the story! Hope you keep reading! Report Review
wow, so years of hating each other to suddenly being friends? That's either going to work out really well or go horribly wrong and she just wants to get to Al then pull pranks on Reagan..Author's Response: It does seem a bit sketchy, doesn't it? But you'll just have to keep reading to find out =p
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hahaaa, I never knew ten year olds were that disobeying..Author's Response: Well, Reagan is a ten year old of her own, I suppose. Thank you for your review! Report Review
I don't trust her at all. I know I should but I don't. Maybe I'm just paranoid but still. Keep writing
:)Author's Response: Well I'm not going to give anything away, but the next chapter will answer a few things, I think. Thanks for taking the time to review! Report Review
Yey, thanks for updating! Felicia seems to mean it, i hope she does! Will something happen between Al and Regan soon?? ;) Looking forward to more, PGAuthor's Response: Well, you're very welcome for updating, thank you for reviewing! As for Al and Rea action, you won't have to wait TOO much longer =p Report Review
wow! this chapter was funny and unexpected with having Felicia and Reagan being friends. how are Reagan's friends going to react when she tells them about her new friendship with Felicia? will u update soon please?^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Ahh, the Al, James, and Lily response... should be interesting! I will update as soon as my outrageous load of AP work let's me. Thanks for the great review! Report Review
A new chapter! :D Finally, haha!
Okay, the Felicia-thing was like, whoa! Definitely didn't expect that. But I'm glad that that's out of the way and they might become friends (again). I'm also wondering about what will happen between Reagan and Al now; I mean, something should happen sooner or later, right? ;)
Rachel and Donald Sache had better start watching their backs, I suppose! What would Raegen do to them? Are they even magical? Because if they aren't, it might be even more interesting :P
Hope you update soon!Author's Response: I'm so glad you found the Felicia thing good. I was a bit worried that it would sound lame, but I think it turned out the way I wanted. Thank you for the review! Report Review
SO GOOD! 10/10, I really love Reagan. There are a lot of sweary tomboys out there, but this one is so unique :) Please, please, PLEASE write more!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you think she's different from the rest. That's what I was going for! ;) Report Review
"I just want to let you know that your not reading the story of some wimpy, whiney little pureblood."
"Don't think that your having some inside joke with my mother about how Al and I both don't like to wear "unreasonable clothing.
^^ the "your" is "you're"
"We both took of our dress clothes, put on some of Albus' play clothes, and climbed down the latter on the outside of his window. "
^ I'm pretty sure you meant "ladder" instead of "latter"
Um, pretty good start but watch out for your grammar, it takes away from the story and can be distracting.
off to next chapter!Author's Response: Ahh! Thanks for looking out for that. I try to be careful about grammar and spelling, but sometimes I miss things. (I guess I should just get a beta) Thanks, again. Report Review
Please update soon! :) I really love it! I wish I had someone like Al...xD
10Author's Response: I'm working on the 7th chapter right now... thank you so much for the review! Report Review
What does it say? Hmmm ... Hopefully something good. Did I sense Albus getting a little jealous there? Yay! They are so cute. I love what they had to write out. Hilarious!
Keep writing, Hugs
:)Author's Response: I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story, and I'll be updating within the week! Thank you! Report Review
Oh update please! I want to know what the letter says! Awesome chapter 10/10. Ps: I also don't really like croft. Seems like a huge pervert ;]Author's Response: I am ALMOST done with the next chapter! It should be up within the week! Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
Aww, Al's being territorial... Can't wait until what happens next! :)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad that you took the time to review! Report Review
This is insanely funny!! I seriously laughed my pants off!! Just wondering, are the weasleys going to have much of an appearance in this story orvis it just reagan and the potters?
Btw I totally adore the people in the chapter images as reagan and al. They match perfectly!! Keep weiting! hthis is amazing!!!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you find the story funny; that's what I was going for ;]
Yes, the Weasley's will have a part in all this, but not as big as the Potters. Report Review
Nice story,I like Reagan but Albus can be a tad annoying.I get that he's jealous over Ethan but every time he jumps and screams at him like that makes him look strange in Reagan's eyes.I actually like Ethan,he likes Reagan and unlike Albus shows it.I liked he's comments when Albus stated that Reagan was his.Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I know Al's annoying, but that's the way he is for now... maybe he'll be changing soon =]
As for Ethan, shh, but I like him too! Report Review
Brilliant! I swear this will have me laughing for days.The whole OSO ordeal reminds of how I acted with my four younger siblings. And I am best friends/mortal enemies with the kid across the street. Keep writing it!!Author's Response: Yay, I'm so glad you got so many laughs out of it! I will certainly keep writing this, and thank you so much for the review! Report Review
NO! I wanted to read it :( Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: I just took a break from writing it to check for reviews! It should be up soon! Thank you for the feedback; I really appreciate it! Report Review
please please please please please please please pleaseplease please please please please please please pleaseplease please please please please please please pleaseplease please please please please please please please udpdate sooon!!Author's Response: Well, then! I will certainly try. Thank you very much for the enthusiastic review! Report Review
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