this is a perfect set up for a dramatic story :) i'm really excited about this storyyAuthor's Response: thankyou! so am i.. Report Review
this chapter was a little dark and confusing. was James talking or Lily? Also don't take me wrong but u need to add more spaces between the sentences or paragraphs or else this becomes a little confusing to be read. I am looking 4ward to read more of ur story. what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: weeelll, it DOES say "Harry's P.O.V" at the top...
yeah, i'll space it.
update when i have the time. Report Review
That was a really interesting format, liked it a lot.Author's Response: Thanks mate! I was a bit iffy about it to start with, but I think I'll keep writing like that. Report Review
I really enjoyed this! It has a very tragic feel. I would love to see more development of Lily's relationship with James.Author's Response: Mhm thats what's going on next chapter, back to Hogwarts.
A tad more complicated though. Thankyou! Report Review
I like this. This has the potential to be a great/fantastic story. i would like u to make this a novel if u want. please pretty please make a novel!^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Haha i'll see if I get the time to. But thanks a lot. Report Review
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