5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by heyITSme The Nightmare Men

3rd May 2009:
this is a perfect set up for a dramatic story :) i'm really excited about this storyy

Author's Response: thankyou! so am i..

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Review #2, by Harry and Ginny The Nightmare Men

3rd May 2009:
this chapter was a little dark and confusing. was James talking or Lily? Also don't take me wrong but u need to add more spaces between the sentences or paragraphs or else this becomes a little confusing to be read. I am looking 4ward to read more of ur story. what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: weeelll, it DOES say "Harry's P.O.V" at the top...

yeah, i'll space it.
update when i have the time.


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Review #3, by MorningMoon Runaway

28th March 2009:
That was a really interesting format, liked it a lot.

Author's Response: Thanks mate! I was a bit iffy about it to start with, but I think I'll keep writing like that.

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Review #4, by RonsGirlFriday Runaway

28th March 2009:
I really enjoyed this! It has a very tragic feel. I would love to see more development of Lily's relationship with James.

Author's Response: Mhm thats what's going on next chapter, back to Hogwarts.
A tad more complicated though. Thankyou!


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Review #5, by Harry and Ginny Runaway

27th March 2009:
I like this. This has the potential to be a great/fantastic story. i would like u to make this a novel if u want. please pretty please make a novel!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Haha i'll see if I get the time to. But thanks a lot.

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