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Review #1, by LucyintheSkywithDiamonds New me.

17th July 2009:
I don't feel any emotion in your writing. It's just letters on a page instead of words coming together as pictures and scenes. I found myself bored with it very early in. I would suggest grabbing a thesaurus and looking up some new words. I think that's what one of your big problems is repeating words. I really hope it does get better, but it's just not really for me.

Author's Response: Thanks for giving it a chance, i will work on what you said.

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Review #2, by hermione888 Chapter 3. Safe.

8th July 2009:
wow I loved this story! Nice job!^_^ :) =) srry I like smiley faces 10/10

Author's Response: Awwwe First review! Thank you soo much :)
Best regards

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