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Review #1, by Me Oh My

Why won't you go out with me?

20th July 2009:

Love it! I love Isabella. She's sweet but she takes no shit. Can't wait to see where this goes :)

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Review #2, by Siriius

Why won't you go out with me?

6th July 2009:

Whoa ho! I've read plenty of stories where Sirius is a total player but this is a side I've never seen of him before but I love it :D This was a fantastic start and I love Isabella's characterization. Plus, I love length! It was alot longer than your other chapter and I like that (:

Is this the same Demi from the other story? Oh, probably not cause the other one's a Muggle right? I'm somewhat glad too that Isabella got partnered up with Remus and not Sirius. I just think that if Sirius is going to have a thing for her, he can leave it til they're outside of Potions class ;D

10/10 (;

Author's Response: Course it isn\\\'t the same Demi! Unless, for some reason, Demetria\\\'s parents decided to inform her she was really a witch. o-o

Nahh, I just really like the name Demetria. Thank you for reading this story as well! ♥

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Review #3, by amanda

Why won't you go out with me?

6th April 2009:

i like it!!! you are a very good writer!! i like the way the story is going as well! cant wait to see what happens next! :)

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Review #4, by Harry and Ginny

Why won't you go out with me?

4th April 2009:

Great start 4 this 1st chapter. what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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