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Review #1, by greenbeanjean The Inconvenience of Being Mad

10th September 2009:
I like it but it feels more like the chapter of a novel than a short story. It doesn't seem complete enough for a short story, but the characters and everything else I like!

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Review #2, by Nora The Inconvenience of Being Mad

18th April 2009:
This is terrific, please continue it. It doesn't seem right to leave it off here. I feel like you've created this cute character only to do away with her in about five sentences of speech.

Author's Response: Hah.
I really must thank you for saying such things as I think I quite love Madeleine. Am actually strongly considering putting up a short story with her in a week or so. c:


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Review #3, by Paloma Patil The Inconvenience of Being Mad

18th April 2009:
"I think I fancy Lorcan Scamander."

Naturally.

"You don't say."

Marianne smiled sheepishly.

"What do you thing?"

"I think that this toast has too much butter," Madeleine said, setting the offending slice down.

This exchange is wonderfully natural and made me laugh out loud. Mad's voice is excellent, and I can't wait to read more of the story. Nice work!

Paloma

Author's Response: *squee*
Am exceedingly pleased that you like the dialogue. I rather enjoy laughter, myself and for this reason am not finished with Mad, I think. Thanks Paloma!

*trots off to edit*[noticed a spelling error D:]


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