I really enjoyed this One-Shot. Finding unusual parings is really cool. This was one of the most unusual that I have come across and somehow, you managed to make it work.
Pansy was never really one of my favourite characters, but somehow, in this story, she actually is.
I hoped that she wouldn't leave, but when I read the final few lines, it became evident that she had too. Poor Remus.
10/10 for the story though.Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review, I'm very happy to hear that you liked this one-shot. I'm not entirely sure why I wrote it at first, I guess I just had a craving for an unusual pairing and voila! Out popped a Pansy/Remus story! Anyway thanks again for reviewing :) Report Review
I love finding new stories with rare pairing's and this was definately an extremely unusual couple. I'm not a big fan of Pansy, but you really matured her in this story, and I could see them both together when reading it.
I did kinda hope that Pansy wouldn't leave, but I think the fact that she was pregnant and did leave just made the ending that much more powerful.
I really enjoyed reading it, and thought you did a great job creating a believable scenario for such a different pairing.Author's Response: Thank you so much, you don't know how much that made my day. Thanks again for reviewing :) Report Review
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