You can tell this was your first song-fic. It isn't of the same quality as the others, but I still enjoyed it very much. And this is the first one to make me cry (mainly because your song choices are too good xD). It was just as good as the others when the song came into play, but before that it wasn't as good.
This sentence confused me a little bit: "He had all those that could, sit, there weren't enough seats and then he told them the basics of what had happened while the people in the portraits on his walls pretended to be sleeping." But I do still love the little details you put in, like the portraits pretending to be sleeping.
I'm starting to really like the idea of fics from another persons point of view but cannon to the books. This is the best I've read so far.
When you mentioned the Hershey's bar I just about wanted to rip my hair out. It's probably where I'm from england that it got me so much. (And the truck, despite my family currently owning one xD)
Apart from that I really loved this. The story was beautiful and I love the way you write songfics. :) 9/10Author's Response: I'm SORRY lol :P What would you suggest I edit it too lol. I didn't even think about that not being British. I was in England for a day and a half once 4 years ago but that was all. I didn't get to go to a grocery store just a souvenir shop in London and a pizza place, well that and all the touristy sites. You know what I mean. Out of the eurotrip I was on it was one of my two favorite cities, the other was Venice in Italy. I'm sorry about that, you don't even know! Lol. Obviously I'm American, sigh, can't help where you are born. I'm glad you like the way I write songfics, now for a novel maybe, hmm. I'm glad it's the best canon you've read so far from a different characters pov. It was really easy to put myself into her shoes, I'm not sure why. That sentence is confusing, I will change it sometime. I'm sorry I made you cry too, but impressed that it could have that effect on you. Thank you so much for all of your awesome reviews! You are by far one of my most favorite reviewers EVER! Report Review
this was an interesting fic. keep up the good work.^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: I just did a little victory dance because I haven't gotten a review in like a really long time. SO THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I'm waiting for my second songfic to get validated, I love it, I think it's amazing. You should check back in some other time when it's up. It's called "Father's Son". And thanks again!!! Report Review
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