Hey there I liked this. There was no dialog or very little, and I am one of them people that the way a character talks to another pulls me in and I have to say that the way that you used the words also the flow was what kept me going. I liked that it was very real felling behind it. I would have like if it was a little longer and even if we had got to know the OC name. Or even the way she felt after his song was done like it flipped POV just at the end of a little. Report Review
That is a great story i loved! Cant wait for the next chapter! Report Review
*Thumbs up* I guess I've never read a story, where Sirius ends badly and doesn't get a girl of his heart. And I am pretty shocked, at the I really thought, it will be ending like in every MarySue story, but...amazing idea. Really nice:)Author's Response: awww thanx! ya at first i wasn't planning on it ending like that, but then it just sorta happened. thanx for reading and reviewing! Report Review
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