I really like this, I love Sirius/Lily James/Lily and this is a sweet and pleasant start to the story :) However, I am a bit unclear about their personalities at the end, but apart from that well done can't wait for the enxt chapter xoxo Report Review
This was simple, and sweet, and beautiful. Well done.Author's Response: You are very kind, thank you most earnestly. Report Review
It's very interesting and funny. I hope you'll keep updating soon. 9/10. (Because u should make the chapters a bit longer.)Author's Response: C: Oh. Neat. I am pleased you find it very interesting. *takes the nine most graciously* Oh, the length. Always the length. I am awesome at length. -__- Report Review
I think I like it but I honestly don't get it! Do lily and sirius like secretly like eachother or what? i am kinda confused!Author's Response: I know. I'm sorry. Thank you. I shall clear it up presently. They do like each other quite a bit... they like each other like the marauders like each other. Hope to have it fixed up real pretty like soon. o_O 'ta Report Review
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