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Review #1, by MrsWonWon A Disturbance of Sorts

9th May 2009:
Awesome story so far! Great description, especially at the beginning in the carriages! Can't wait to see how it all turns out...
=)

Author's Response: thanks so much, I update as often a i can :)

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Review #2, by Childish_Fairy Emily

17th April 2009:
Aw, Rose and Scorpius are so cute together! They clash so wonderfully that I want them to get together.

Scorpius has a few issues in relationships, jealous but he really doesnt care. I like the arrogance there, like he should be the onlly person hiis girl thinks about.

10/10
hope you update soon!

Author's Response: oh i definatly will :) just validating the new chapter. good, thats exactly how i wanted them to be :)

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Review #3, by Childish_Fairy Burning Information

17th April 2009:
I like that Rose is so strong willed! Its nice to have her not needing a boyfriend and I really want to know what was in the letter!

10/10

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Review #4, by Childish_Fairy A Disturbance of Sorts

17th April 2009:
Scorpius is so cute and kind of adorable in his little daringness (i say its a word!). I like that you put him in gryfindor, a nice twist.

10/10

Author's Response: haa thanks. The idea was to make him extremely full of himself but still he has his weaknesses. :P

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Review #5, by bespontaneous A Disturbance of Sorts

18th March 2009:
i'm wondering about the random capital letters, but i'm sure i'll figure it out
i liike how you depict Scorpious with black hair instead of bleach blonde
great openning chapter
can't wait to read the rest

Author's Response: haa the letters are because sometimes when I type i put them in without realising it. its kind of annoying to edit them out :S thanks the second one should be validated soon

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