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Review #1, by hermionieforever FLANNERY!

26th July 2009:
Your story is good but it could be better if you punctuate the ends of your sentences--I noticed that they just end without any periods or anything. I like the idea of quintuplets. ;)

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Review #2, by Adyrose Weasley FLANNERY!

25th April 2009:
I like youre story, especially the Lovegood/Scamander interactionative ways. Just like there parents =D
-Adyrose

Author's Response: Thanks, I really thought that Luna's kids had to have a very distinct personality, everyone has their own personality, but they are Luna's kids. anyways thanks again
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