but you definatly had your imagination working overtime,
but one question
WHY did you have hermione and ron break up?
10 outa 10Author's Response: Honestly, I don't like Ron so much. I'm not criticising JKR that she put Ron and Hermione together, but I don't like them so much as a pair. Report Review
WHAT THAT WAS SOOO SHORT!!! Please please please please update APAP Report Review
I mean I can't wait for the next chapter! PLEASE UPDATE SOON, THE SUSPENSE IS TOO MUCH! Report Review
overall good, but more descirbing would be good.Author's Response: I know, but unfortunately I'm no good in describing =/ Report Review
wow, no stop reading feeling instead i got a what is going on here feeling, you have a strange imagination my friendAuthor's Response: Yeah, I\\\'ve heard that a lot before xd Report Review
again i have said this to many authors, are you jk rowling, i mean i want to stop reading but it is so good and suspensful that its hard to Report Review
you are making too many mistakes, you need a beta reader, but still suspensful Report Review
ooh its like a car wreck, horrifying but you can't stop reading Report Review
ooh, things seem bad from the start Report Review
kinda heartwarming with the kreacher note, you should edit these chapters with all these errors Report Review
oh wow. YOU ARE GOING TO KILL RON HERMIONE AND GINNY? that is messed up on top of all that you have voldey rise again, how many times must he rise before he goes down for the count, plus you have lots of spelling errors, sorry but my story got so much of those that i just had to point that outAuthor's Response: Um, no, theyr not gonna die, and the end is kinda weird like the whole story. C\\\'mon it was like few years ago that I wrote that story lol
Yeah I know there might be a lot of spelling errors but I try to not do them. Report Review
I'm a huge of pace and how a story flows and I have to say that yours is one of the best I've read so far. A definite plus for me and it reads really easily that I don't even know that I'm reading until it's finished. It's like a book that likes to taunt me by making me wait. Sorry a slight tangent it's fairly late here.
I like your writing and overall style, you certainly have a unique take on things and I see that as a huge compliment, your establishment of what is to come and the story that we need to go into it is really good and I look forward to the next update of it so I can see it. You don't have to hope that we like it, if it's anything like what you've written so far, it'll be a hit.
Congratulations on the work so far.
Anonymous Writer.Author's Response: Thank you very much! This means a lot to me! :) Report Review
Nice and please update soon thanks. Report Review
Y u break ron n mione up YY??Author's Response: Actually I don't remember why I did it, cause it was such a long time ago when I wrote that story, but I know there was a reason. Sorry if you don't like it, but that's just the way the story goes! :) Report Review
Cool chapter and please write more as I am enjoying the story. Thanks for updating.Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it. The next chapter will be out as soon as possible! Report Review
Excellent start and please write more thanks as I am enjoying the story. So is Voldemort going to come back?Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked :) and yes his going to come back, but not for very long ;) I actually mixed some movies to my storie so it's not ordinary HP fic. Report Review
sounds good cant wait to read more...Author's Response: Next chapter will be out as soon as it's validated :) Report Review
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