Hello Malia! I'm here to review for TGS's Frantic Frenzy!
This was fantastic. I enjoyed the symbolism of the piece. The weight that Pansy has carried on her shoulders in so powerful in chapter, I could have wept. It's so nice to see who I believe is the real Pansy - not a weak, cowering girl who fawns over Draco.
Her description of his looks was absolutely hilarious! The story is supposed to be deep and it certainly is, but that not-so-perfect image Pansy has of Draco is simply delicious!
Overall, this was a fantastic read and I have no CC!
ShelbyAuthor's Response: Shelby -hugs-
Thank you so much XD I tried to make her the complete oppisite of that girl who obsesses over Draco, and I am glad that you see that ^_^
XD I wanted to make it deep, but those lines simply begged to be written! I love them and laughed while writing them - it was nice to hear someone comment on them XD
Thank you so much, Shelby! Report Review
This is a really good, very different take on Pansy Parkinson. I liked it well done.
xxAuthor's Response: Thank you, deary! I wanted to stray from the normal way that Pansy is characterised - either a trampy bitch, or an indifferent case. I wanted her to have her own mind and traits that you can't get from the books. Thank you for the lovely review.
-Malia Report Review
I loved it! But I still love a good looking Draco more lol, well done 10/10 xAuthor's Response: Thanks, lovey! And I do agree! Draco with wonderful looks and hard-packed abs? Of course! But I wanted Pansy to NOT be a lovesick puppy, and Draco had to be a bad person for her not to like :) Thank you for the lovely review.
-Malia Report Review
Very Nice :) I love how Pansy breaks free :)Author's Response: Awe, thanks :]
Everyone seems to like that. I think I just might have a series of one-shots to follow this one up, but I'm not too sure /: Anywho, thank you so much for the review :] Report Review
Hey I have a question.. will you continue to write more to this story or not? Because I think that it could be a really good Pansy/Draco, and I know I've been waiting for a good Pansy/Draco for a while now! Please continue to write more chapters :]Author's Response:
Hmm, I suppose that I could write a nice little short-story to add to this one-shot :] We'll see x] Aha, thank you very much! Report Review
Excellent! I love how you really show her feeling and how it fits with your challenge. It's easy to read, which I enjoy, and it's nice to see a different view on Pansy.
10/10!Author's Response: thanks, i tried to make her seem strong, but in her own little way. it was weird, seeing her in this light for me. thanks for the rating :] Report Review
i totaly agree with the last bit!!! "I am free. I am no longer a puppet. I have the choice. I am me." hell yes!!!Author's Response: haha, thanks so much :D Report Review
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