HAHAHAHAHA, i am seriously rolling, and not rolling, like when people say in texting, or chatting rofl. i am serious out loud laughing, for like a strait minute there! really liked it!

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aww that was great, Lily Would do that! off to read the sequel now :) 10/10!

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Lol that was really good! funny and cute at the same time :D MEEP! i'm going to go read James's revenge now :D

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PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! PLEASE! I FREAKIN ADORE THIS. it's perfect. utterly. completely. perfect! all the characters are spot on, and it made me grin. i love it. very well done inded!!!


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AWWW!!! Loved it! Keep writing about Lily and James please!!! This was amazing! So funny and adorable i just loved it sooo much!!! Definately one of my faves!!!

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I absolutly love how you portrayed Lily :) and Sirius! and of course, Potter. This story was so incredibly funny and witty I didn't think I'd be able to take much more of it!

It was fantastic!

XO-
Shelby Weasley

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I do like this but I think (as I do in all stories, even my own) that Lily is a bit up herself. Just my opinion but I still adore this piece
marauderqueen
10

Author's Response: She always does seem to turn out that way, doesn't she? :P
Thanks so much for the review!

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This was so sweet! I loved the last line and Sirius was just portrayed so brilliantly in the story- "Behaving now." I loved his reactions to Lily and McGonagall's threats!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love writing Sirius xD

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that is the greatest, most brilliant, extremely amazing, entertaining, adorable, swoon-worthy, cute, funny, and lots of other good adjectives, revenge EVER!!
it was so sweet :) i loved it! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! :)

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Hilarious!
Really, all of the mauraders were perfectly done!
And Lily was wonderful.

10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Ha, that was hilarious! I was in stitches the entire time :D I love that Lily kissing him would be the thing that would 'confuse him so much he wouldn't know what to do.' Priceless.

Author's Response: xD Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Magnificant. Wonderful. I really love this. I do. Thank you, Sweet Decadence, for writing this truly lovely, wonderful, amazing, spectacular, stupendous, entertaining, honest, endless-amount-of-adjectives-continued-some-later-time story. I really, really enjoyed this. I thank you from the bottom of my heart for your beautiful words.

Author's Response: Awww thank you so much for the amazing review! ^_^

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O! I loved it:)
You captured Sirius so well!

Author's Response: Sirius=WIN.
Always.
I had to do him justice XD
Thank you so much!
-Ande

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Aw,... what an awesome type of revenge! Good story. I can really see it happen. 9/10!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
-Ande

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haha take that potter! the oh-so-smart lily evans strikes again! bet james didnt see that coming. this one-shot was totally awesome. 10/10!
Veela_is_me

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
-Ande

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Hahahahah
Loved it!
Your style is great, and I loved the progression of the story.
Nice one shot!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!
-Ande

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That was great. One thing - McGonagall called Lily 'miss Potter'. if that was intentional, sorry. just thought i'd point it out.
love the story! hehe lol

Author's Response: No it was an accident. I fixed it though. xD
Thank you so much for the review!
-Ande

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Ha- this was a clever little story. I especially liked the whole Lily talking in third person thing. Also, the general feeling in the end (sort of looking for revenge, but also a little confused), is a good feeling (I think) for a Lily and James story. In all, it seems like a pretty realistic way that Lily and James could have began.
If you ever decided to do more with this, I'd definatly be interested!
Eavan

Author's Response: I am planning a sequel, from James' perspective that should be out soon xD
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for the review!

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hahaha loved it! wow this was great! i loved Lily's charachter and the end with hte 'take that Potter" haha that was great, very good job

Author's Response: Thank you oh-so much!
-Ande

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That was short and sweet. I loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you!
-Ande

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Naww Ande.
This is so cute!
I LOVED this line: "You told me, and I quote, 'I promise, you won’t regret it.' "
Anyway the whole thing was just completely adorable, especially the last line.
Thank you so much
XD

Author's Response: You're very welcome Jack. ^_^
ILYSFM -squishes-

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TeeHee!! omgoodness! wow! i loved the ending! lol and the rest of the story too lol! i'm still giggly from the ending!

Author's Response: lol thank you so much!
-Ande

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Oh how sweet!
Love this story.
10/10

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it!
-Ande

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AW that was so sweet... i loved it! just one thing i saw though...

""Now that Mr. Black has decided to be quiet, Miss Potter, what was that noise?" She repeated."

isn't Lily, Miss. Evans???

but thats cool, other than that i saw no other mistakes. lovely story, it really made my day!!! 10/10

Author's Response: OMG THANK YOU for pointing that out! It was like 2 in the morning. xD
I fixed it though.Thanks so much for the review, I'm so glad you liked it!
-Ande

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