this is a good start to your story. i'd like to see where it leads, so update soon :)

10/10

Author's Response: Very kind, thank you. I shall do so quite soon, I expect.

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I like the end. Hannah seems absent minded and sort of like she thinks about herself too much. I like Neville. Too much stuff at the beginning slowed it down.

Author's Response: I always get muddled in a sea of exposition, will try to right that in the future. I'm glad the end was adequate c: and hope it was at least nominally subtle. Neville *sigh*... I think it very possibly to swoon for him. C=
Cheers Miss. Shortbottom

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i love hannah nevilles!

Author's Response: Ah. Cheers. I share such a love. The more Neville the better. C:

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Loved it hope you will continue this story of Neville and Hannah.

Author's Response: Cheers. I love Neville and Hannah. Will - To be sure. C:

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I just love Neville/Hannah fics!! There really aren't enough of them around, so I'm glad I've found a good one :)

This seems really great so far, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: c:
Oh. Cheers. Thank you so much, I totally agree about the sad lack of Neville & Hannah fictions in the archive and am terribly glad you find this particular story to be decent thus far. I love Neville and Hannah is turning out as quite the joyful poufsouffle.

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Nice story so far. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Glad you think so. Thanks very much for saying as much. Will try to update soon. Cheers.

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