i really didn't like it sorry but i just cant see lily really being like that sorry

Author's Response: I see where you're coming from, and I admit this is one of my more off-the-wall stories. I was just trying to do something different, without changing her character, and I saw the constant rejection of James as her being very awkward and self conscious.
Yes it's extreme, but I enjoyed writing it.
Thanks for the review, and I hope you find more of my writing to your taste.

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Charming and beautiful. Unique and enchanting. It's magnificant, and the four other aforementioned adjectives. Your words are. Words are the reflection of your soul. You are as well.

Thank you, Natures Nobility, for writing this.

Author's Response: *blushes*
wow.
It seems to have really touched you then. :)
I have a similar one I'm considering putting up at the moment, It's called Potter boys and It's along the same road as this.
Keep you eyes peeled for it.
I tried to just write about things that I know about, and yeah i suppose words are the reflection of your soul, you're right.
NN

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Aw that was so sweet at the end!
I loved it =]
10/10
xx Effy

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the end, I was playing around with the last line for a long while before i put that down.
Glad it worked for you.
NN

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Great story! Your are an amazing author and i can't wait to read more stories by you

Author's Response: Thank you so much, it means so much when i get good reviews,
I'll keep writting just for people like you.
NN

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