One word. Awesome.
I absolutely LOVE what I've read so far, and I definitely can't wait to read more. :D Report Review
Very good and interesting. I like it so far. Report Review
Loved the first chapter, can't wait to read the second one. I love how your writting flows so well together, and how real your words are when I am reading them. Keep up the great work.
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How I love plot twists! This is really creative...can't wait to see where it goes. :-) Do Ron and Harry ever find out Hermione has to be joined at the hip with Tom Riddle? Must be traumatizing for poor Ginny, too.Author's Response: They will find out eventually, and all hell will break lose *insert evil grin* Report Review
Realy good set-up for the rest of the story to come! Will the 3rd yew wand be important later in the story?
And did Hermione make up the "avadon dendras" spell, or is it some obscure spell she found somewhere?Author's Response: thank you, and yes, the 3rd Yew Wand will be important later, though I have yet to decide whether its going to be important in this story or its sequel.
And yes the "Avadon Dendras" is invented by Hermione. Report Review
A very good first chapter, I can't wait to read the next. Very interesting, and captivating. Good job!Author's Response: the next chapter is on its way :) Report Review
Heheh, the last part sent a chill down my spine -- the feeling felt werid. A good story and well written. Like the new spell, might use in a story or two. Have marked this as one of my favorites and look forward to more chapters. Keep up the good writing.Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it :) Report Review
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