aww, I love how Charlie shows up in the end...finally I might add, she seemed to be really missing him!! lol, anyway, great chapter!! love the story, and the chapter titles!!
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"current state that ME emotions are in..."
I believe you ment MY. ;p
I LOVED her dream! Amazingly unique.
Let's see here:
*Alice in Wonderland
Is that it?Author's Response: THanks for the review, and you got all but one, you missed the Monty Python: Holy Grail reference "Castle Anthrax" but that is the one that i kinda assumed people would miss.
THanks again. Report Review
Very, very good!
I thought that the sword fighting was a bit...dramatic I guess.
Keep going! Report Review
Wow, that was really good.
Oh, and I like My Chemical Romance too. Author's Response: Thank you very much. And as for MCR, love them, and Teenagers fit real well for tasha's character.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
How lovely, dearie.
I really liked it. I think that it is going to be getting really interesting. Try not to repeat yourself when you change the POVs. Report Review
Wait, who's Tony?
I like the story though. :)
A few errors in spelling, but good job.Author's Response: Tony is the physical trainer for the team and he is also JJ's boyfriend.
Thanks again for the read and the review. Report Review
But it is good. :DAuthor's Response: Well i hope that the next chapter clears some stuff up for you.
I just submitted it so I am hoping that it gets validated soon. Thanks, as always, for the read and the review. Report Review
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