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Review #1, by stepnhunguyen New Students at Hogwarts

11th March 2009:
A good start. I want to give you some advice in your continuing stories though. First of all, you are going way to fast. They are only 603 words so I would suggest to explain it more through. Second, think through your story first because there are not a lot of action and no pairings. Third you say there are Teddy and Victoire, but where are they? Please read through my advice and consider the tips I have presented and maybe folow them. Any ways it's a good so far. 10/10

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