4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by emerald_moons True Happiness

5th May 2009:
Hello, here on your requesting. :)

One thing I saw in the beginning was that Judi was a bit too boring, too average. Everyone has something that makes them different. I know things will change, but everything is quite insanely perfect. No one died at all?

There are just a few grammar errors, like:
"We all already know the tow of you are getting hitched." Where you said tow instead of two.

The flow is good and it is a nice beginning, good to leave the cliffy! :D


Author's Response: hmmm thanks so much for the review and feedback

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Review #2, by JohnnyPickAlot True Happiness

25th April 2009:
Heya, Sarah here by request.
First off, I would like to say that this seems to be a wonderful start to your sequel. It fills people in on what they may have missed and gives us a little bit of a happy/yet evil cliffy.
I was a bit confused about Judi's background only for the fact that I didn't read the first fic. :P
So, yes, the flow is good. There are a few grammatical errors in the beginning but those are easy enough to fix. Also, the characterization was good as well.

Very nice. Keep it up x]

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and the feedback

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Review #3, by The Empress True Happiness

23rd April 2009:
Here with your review! Great first chapter! I haven't read the story preceding this, but it sounds good. :) Great story here! I like your descriptions and the dialogue is interesting. I loved the ending! What a way to end it. :D Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. The first timeturners was a bit big. it was the first story i ever finished i think. I had a lot of fun writing and i am sure that I will have a lot of fun writing this one as well

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Review #4, by raynbow toes (too lazy to login) True Happiness

20th April 2009:
Hey. This story's doing pretty well so far. Your writing skill is quite good, I'll just wait to see what this story has in store!

I'd love to see more of the other characters like Cedric, Cho, Harry, Ron and whatnot :)

Author's Response: Oh you will, trust me. If you haven't already you should read the Prequel to this: Timeturners Saving Cedric Diggory

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